oc character profile: stella

[Doogie]

Based on the Original Character Sheet, each section has a minimum word requirement. All the sections check out, except for the Appearance. It is supposed to be 350 words, and is only 200 something. So, I shall add "[WIP]" to the title, meaning Work In Progress. Because of this, you will have 7 days to edit it, and make it the correct length. Just post letting us know you've editted. If you don't do it within 7 days then this profile will be rejected. If that happens, just finish it up, and then repost.

Good luck!
Doogs

[stelliea]

Ok, I edit it. Really, I'm grateful that someone finally pay some attention to me, but I swear I thought the appearance section require 100 word, while the personality required 350. BTW I don't think we need that much word for appearance, I have nothing more to add, I don't know what to write anymore. Why do we even need that many, I'm confused....

Oh, please mods, don't disappear on me again. I agree to change as many times as you guys needed, but staying here all by myself is not fun at all.

[Doogie]

Okey dokey, it seems you are correct! The Appearance only needs to be 100 words! *hands this over to Ellie* =3

[Ellie who has 0%]

*wiggles in*

I shall continue for here. The word requirements are to prevent the profiles that have hardly any detail. It's quite difficult to stretch one who would only write 3 sentences to something more elaborate.

Ahem this is just a reply to the 'request', a rhetorical question: Why make such comment on characters you have no control over...especially if I remember correctly...your character originally had a crush on Riku before you edited (so I take it canon x oc isn't that hard to digest)? Just saying, it's 'unfair' to even prop up your 'wants' on a character you don't even have.

So let's get started:

Overall:
You need to patch this up nicely. I don't see the purpose of all of these parenthesis. Get rid of them and make use of the information you have in them into appropriate complete sentences, or they would be considered useless fillers, which I won't count when it comes to word counts. It's actually quite irking to see such structure. Fix that up for I can read through the profile.

[Ellie who has 0%]

To back track, the question was rhetorical for a reason, for we won't get to out of topic, but to response to your response. It doesn't make much sense; also if your reponse was to Shiay's Riku, but perhaps if you knew the scenario more than what you assumed, then you would barely have an argument to stand on.

For we can get back on task. Riku was played previously by Velum who willingly had Riku have a relationship with an OC. He doesn't have Riku anymore, and Shiay applied and recieved him. Now she had re-applied for that Riku since the character was open again after a long time of hardly any usage. So it isn't unjust, but trying to continue continuity.

Also to get back on track of your profile. I have infact read it. If I didn't I wouldn't have known your character HAD a crush on Riku...would I not. Also if you didn't understood my truthfulness before I shall reiterate. You should make complete sentences than using unneccessary (). Yes I can read through your profile, but its a nuisance to see the countless () that have no real reason to be there. It causes counter productivity to read thouroughly along with other pet peeves such as: cluster narrative paragraphs and dialouge, paragraphs that aren't double spaced. It helps me, help you.

Also you're not helping me by telling me what I should do. I am well aware of how to be a mod. Actually I'm not even an OFFICIAL mod and I have been viewing profiles rather well. To clarify the mistake you made in your accusation, I am viewing profiles despite an OFFICIAL status, because I see that its irresponsible to leave members waiting here for...weeks up to a month without a reply, which is nothing compare to...2 days for you..or a few minutes.

Since you are so blinded with your shear frustration, which you admitted yourself, I will give you time to marinate. I know my responsibilities as a future mod, and I am aware what the members deserve, but it seems you should know not to judge what you hardly know. Am I hurt? No, because you're not the first and won't be the last, but it would be irresponsible for me as a mod to not point out one's incorrections which can further lead to misunderstanding and overall rudeness and disrespect.

So when your animosity dies down and your ready to help me help you, then we shall continue on with your profile until then chao and enjoy your holiday.

Edit:
Also let's learn a little bit of patience, I find it hypocritical to judge me on my responsibilities when one can't even be patient.