In a cataclysm known as the Nightfall, the worlds were almost completely destroyed by a harrowing surge of darkness.
In the shadows of the ensuing chaos a new group has taken shape. Led by an Aegyl named Kalos, the 11th Hour touts an esoteric knowledge of how to combat the darkness and restore the worlds. They might be the worlds’ best chance at survival; but nobody really knows enough about them to confirm or deny their claims.
On the brink of collapse, the universe holds its breath in anticipation. Of restoration? Of destruction? It is up to individuals like yourself to decide.
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+ I would put ANY abilities of the Weapon in the Weaponry section for organization sake.
Also I would rewrite the sword's ability more concisely, because I was lost and confused after awhile, D: and you do want people to understand what you wrote. There isn't a word requirement for the powers, so you don't have to be overly verbose. Also how long does this ability last and how long must we wait before reconducting?
As for the second ability (giving them names won't hurt either), manipulate what elements? That's pretty vague, and here we try to eliminate as much vaguness as possible for we won't have godmodding issues. If he's manipulating the sand, then just say sand, and give him some manuever he can do with it.
- How long does the sandy sand last? - How can he retrieve it? You made it a big deal that once the sand is used up...the ability is gone unless he collects it.
History: Twilight Town is a general peaceful world. That had more nobody activity which were on a low profile and hardly had any heartless activity, so I don't get how his parents just vanished. We know your charries doesn't know it, but you still need to make sense of it.
Also ...we really don't have Grim Reapers here. The closest one to that is Hades of Olympus. Also we do have a ruling of 'no random anonymous people giving your charrie gifts'. It's been a cheap overused concept.
Also why does your charrie need to learn how to fight in a general peaceful world? Another thing, you have your character currently residing in Traverse Town. How did he even get there?
Another thing you SHOULD add is to track Vig's life by the KH timeline where was he KH: BBS, KH1, and KH2.
