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Powers/Abilities/Techniques/Skills: Fire: A magic spell that shoots a few feet in front of him but he can only use it when the sun is out.
Quad slash: He slashes in front of himself 4 times but can only do all four hits if they all land. He can only use this power when surrounded or outnumbered.
Weapon/Items: Mythril sword: This sword had a red hilt and the blade is dark blue. This sword was made out of some of the strongest metals known to man.
Appearance: Rafael is around 5 foot 6 inches and is very skinny. Rafael has a light tan skin tone. Rafael has jet black hair that is shoulder length. His hair covers the top of his light blue eyes that usually shine in the sun. He has one piercing in his left ear. Usually he wears a blue shirt with blue sweat pants. He never wears anything that shows his back because it had a scar on it. When the sun is blazing a lot he wears light black shorts and a plaid t-shirt. He always wears a pair of white Nike's.
Personality: Some of Rafael's main goals are and will always be to be the strongest in the world. A few of his fears are the fear of losing his life or losing his family. One of his many hobbies is jogging and playing with his yo-yo. He is a very talented artist and musician.
Overall Rafael is a nice person. He is very sweet to people he's known for a couple days. This is also a major flaw because sometimes he can trust the wrong person and that gets him in major trouble.
Rafael works relatively well with others unless he doesn't trust them at all. He is the kind of person who if you ask for his help then he will help you. Some strengths are his magic spells and his handling of any sword. Some weaknesses are his actual strength.
Original World: Destiny Islands
Current World: Destiny Islands
History: When Rafael was 4 he had a full loving family. They got him anything he wanted. But due to being overly spoiled he started acting worse and worse. He was always breaking things when his parents told him no and hitting his mom and dad. He eventually started acting better and better.
When he turned 7 his mom swam out to deep and drowned. Then he got really depressed until another girl on the island named Naomi came and tried to cheer him up. She was about his size but had blonde hair. From that day on they did everything together. Him and Naomi always hung out by the ocean. At his 10th birthday party Rafael and some kids from the island are wrestling. Naomi told him it was a bad idea and she was right because Rafael got slammed through a table.
When he was 12 his fathers heart was taken by the heartless. Then Destiny Island was destroyed and he woke up in Halloween town. He was discovered by the people there and stayed with the professor. When Oogie took over Rafael was still locked in his room. Rafael was looking out the window when he saw a brown haired boy and his two friends leave. He then saw a person using a fire spell and the professor showed him how to do it and that's how he learned to use it.
At thirteen he was asleep in Halloween town when he was magically transported back to Destiny islands. When he got there he was greeted by his best friend Naomi. Naomi told him how she went to Traverse town and met many people. I told her how i went to Halloween town. Then i noticed she got taller and better looking. He remembered how he had no family then Naomi offered for him to stay at her house and he accepted.
When he turned 14 he was very happy. He was happy because Naomi threw him a surprise party. It was also then when Naomi have Rafael his first kiss. Although they never took it any farther. That year Naomi's grandmother died. Rafael and her were never the same.
At 15 Rafael and Naomi stopped being friends because of her boyfriend. Rafael was really jealous because he liked her. Her boyfriend was the sane boy that slammed Rafael through the table when he was 8. That was another reason why they stopped being friend.
Role Playing Sample: Rafael woke up like it was any other morning. He walked down the stairs slowly tripping on a few. He then made his way to the kitchen and made himself some cereal with milk. He then walked upstairs and got a pair of clothes and took a shower in nice refreshing hot water. He sighed looking around as he walked down the stairs fully dressed in his usually black pants with a grey shirt.
He then walked outside barefoot so his feet could soak up the sand. Suddenly he heard a noise in the distance. He stood up and walked towards the source and saw it was only a Shadow heartless.
" Fire " he screamed and pointed his hand towards the heartless and it was burnt and eventually died. He then ran towards the water after noticing he burnt his hand. His hand stopped hurting as he put it in the water. He falls forward into the water after a surprise attack by a Shadow heartless. He was in serious pain but he sucked it up and kicked the heartless and ran to his house. He looked everywhere but couldn't find his sword until he looked in his room. The sword glistened in the light outside and sliced the heartless in half. That final heartless took the energy out of him. He slowly walked home and laid down and suddenly feel asleep. About an hour later he awoke to a sound on the outside. He decided to check it out. Her grabbed his mythril sword and headed outside only to see a group of Shadow heartless waiting for him. Suddenly they all charged at him. He easier until they were close.
" Quad slash " He shouted and he slashed four times and totally demolished the shadow heartless in one hit. He then smiles and lets out a relieved sigh knowing he won.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Dec 30, 2011 16:41:48 GMT -4
o3o ....HI I'm Ellie and I shall be assting you with your profile.
>O We got work to do sunny *cracks whip*
Appearance: Let's be a bit more organized shall we. This is just to help your overall writing. - Try not to go back and forth as in describe his facial features, jump to his clothing, then back to his faicial features. Try to keep everything together. Also you should put that info of his back problem in his apperance, it truly have nothing to do with his personality.
For an example of that, let's take a snipet of my Rikku's Profile
This thief have a head full oh blonde hair that’s been tossed into a ponytail with some strands braided here and there all held back by a blue bandana. Her hair still ruffles over her face covering her unique emerald green Al Bhed eyes. For a sphere hunter, she still flounces about like a teen wearing at times little to nothing with her yellow string bikini and an olive mini skirt. Despite the scantily attire, she stays fashionable with pastel ruffled arm guards, a long warm colored scarf, and white and blue short boots that are loosely tied for easy maneuvering.
You see I pretty much went from one topic of her features to another.
Personality: My main problem is a contradiction. You said his major flaw is being too trusting that he can trust the wrong people, then you said he's perspective of people ulterior motives. << >> If he was...then that major falw wouldn't be a major flaw.
History: The same TLC is needed here: First Paragraph: Talk about what happened during BBS. Also he would be 2 yrs old to be precise.
How? BBS = 10 yrs before KH 1 = 2 yrs Radiant Garden Fell / Kairi poofed into the Islands/ =3 KH1 - he would be 12 Kh2 - he would be 13 Now he would be 14.
Now start knitting things in its chronological order for when his Don't forget the Heartless came when he was 12, and the world was destroyed, so Rafael had to live elsewhere for the time being. But he would return back home at the end of KH1.
Also describe more of his life during Kingdom Hearts 2. I'm sure more happened than a funeral. Also mention what's he's doing now.
History - Omit the daddy teaching magick. If they are native to Destiny Islands I doubt they would know magick, since Destiny Island seems to be ignorant of magick and what not
- His friend Naomi...you mention her...what about her? With making history you don't throw in details that are hardly used or influential. What about their friendship?
- At four he started to get worse and worse...at what? He's only 4.
- His mother left him at 7. Sooo did mommy got up and left the family like ran away...in little Destiny Island where you can surely find her. Was it a train crash? Don't be vague in your history since everything in your life influence you.
- 8 he wresteled with some friends...why? Kinda interesting how a random child play hurt him so much. Sooo how does this injury affect him now since you made it a big deal enough to mention it? Was Naomi there...I hope she told his dumb butt to stop before he hurt himself.
- 12 Dad dies. How did he die, because heartless eats hearts...which means he didn't really technically 'die'. They snatched the heart and the body goooes mcpoofles. So if anything he disappeared. Oor did something else happened that killed him. Where was Rafael when this happened? This is a traumatic experience...you got random black things making people disappear.
- He poofed to Halloween Town. How was his life there since he stayed there for a while. Did he heard when Sora dropped by? Where was he when Oogie Boogie was causing the mayhem in Halloween Town? Who did he stayed with when he was there? You can say he learned magick here, but from who? (Avoid using direct canons interaction for example Jack Skellington taught him magick)
- He would be 12 when he returns to the island. He's back home. Who does he lives with now that his parents are gone? You mention family, so who else where there related to him...or did he stayed with Naomi? Better yet did he find Naomi there? The world poofed so everyone dispersed elsewhere. Since they are bffs I'm sure they tell each other everything. What happened to her during that attack...where did she went off to? Did she changed when she came back?
Also no one wouldn't be really disappearing. The heartless activity dropped at the time.
So did his friend died when he was 12 or 13? Which friend was it...was it Naomi? It should be since you mentioned them being friends since the age of 4. How did she died?
- KH 2 13, so jot everything down.
Also ...why is he friend-less? Did he just not approach Sora, Riku, Kairi, or anyone else?
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Jan 8, 2012 14:21:16 GMT -4
# Note: If you're going to change his age, then be consistent throughout his history. I'm not going to tell you what it should be because it was fine before until you non-chalantly changed it. Also stay in 3rd person of 'he, she, it etc." no I's me's etc.
Also I would advise that when making a character's history, you avoid giving useless unwanted information. Pretty much what you jot down are influential events that made him who he is today.
Examples of useless information Age of 4 --> Nothing spectacular happened here. I know I told you chart his life by the games, but if nothing excessively important happened, then make a general statement like "He was born in a typical loving family". Who care if he was a spoiled brat like nearly EVERY 4 yr old? Does that have ANYTHING to do with who he is now? ....No.
Age of 10 --> Back injury --> What's the point of this? Does this effect him now? If so you should state so here and in his appearance. If this didn't effect him majorly then remove it.
During KH1 --> If you read our profile outline you cannot have canon interactions, so he couldn't have been held 'captive' by Dr. Finklestein. I assumed it was him since you said 'the professor' and did the his 'locking peeps in their rooms m.o. --> well locking Sally'. Also he would still be the same age when he returns to Destiny Island.
KH2 --> present I don't even understand the relation between Naomi and your charrie, and personally I don't think you do either. I mean...her grandmother died...and they were never the same...why? All in all everything isn't so well thought out.
Further a due, this profile is rejected. I think you should browse at accepted characters and/or characters in the final profile to see the continuity, relevancym and neccessity of a charrie's history.
I'm Ellie and I shall be assting you with your profile. 
