Instruction: Mog

[baili0411]

Thanks about the clarification on the paragraph part. I don't write write English articles a lot, and I mainly speak Chinese, where paragraphs works a slight bit different. I actually posted it in the profile page because it's been a while, and for a reason I can't really remember know.

I appreciate the constant tips and that I can come back if I need help. I'll probably start posting in the other RP parts of the forum after profile is accepted.

[mog]

Wait... what? We can modify our Role playing on the character pages? How exactly do I do that without making this thread huge?

[Zephiris]

@ Baili: Perhaps you missed the post where I advised you split up your dialogue in paragraphs, or cluster it together. If you read a book, you'd notice that they never have big chunks of word intermingling with the quotations. They always make a new paragraph for that sort of thing. OR they just have one sentence splitting up a quote, no more. Take this paragraph in your RP sample:

“Hey, I think I found something!” Albus shouted. Magnet came over, and they pulled the thing out, it was a box, filled with necklaces. “Well, who would have put these thing there, the necklaces still look new!” Albus said with confusion. “Are these cursed or something like that?” Then his friend commented about the case, it looked pretty old and broken, and the front of a box has a strange crack. “Well, I think I get it,” Albus said. “The case does look really old, and it probably used to have a lock in front of it. Maybe the owner couldn’t open it and just threw it away. These look very valuable, we better try and return it,” So they walked back to the town’s lost and found.

Look back on the previous page. I already told you how I would adjust it.

What do you mean, Mog?

[mog]

Sorry zeph for not replying. What I mean Baili Has been posting his character Albus's profile on this thread. Could I also do this or could I update it on the page it was originally on?