Poetry A'la Me

[zandre]

((All of these, as of yet, bare no title. Titles are unimportant, the contents hold the real meaning...and please...constructive comments only...I know that I am cheesey sometimes, but its just who I am))

#1:
Remember how it started?
The four of us, a merry band.
Three of you helped that young man
On the edge of his rope, screaming for a helping hand.

Remember how it went?
How we would stay up as late as possible,
Talking about nothing at all, but everything in the world
Remember when that man got the courage to ask the girl?

Remember how it began to fade?
The Quartet became a Trio.
We lost him to the fruit.
And one by one we fell apart, we all followed his suit.

Remember how it ceased to be?
The four friends who couldn't find time for each other anymore?
After all that they had gone through together, I know one man felt torn.

The memories will always be ours,
We can look back and crack a smile,
Thinking of when Ayatsuri became the master, a Puppet no more.
When Xigbar And Xemnas got drunk, and Melvin made his debut.
But more than these, I know that one man will remember, the three of you.

#2
I'm being swallowed up by life..
Weeks and months, without me giving so much as a hello
Drifting away from those I cherish most.
Days go slow and fast all at the same time
I'm wondering why I don't just get over this fear and come back
But will I be welcomed?
Have I hurt you? You, the people I hold dear?

Its painful to see how much has changed.
What used to be nights filled of joy, are now nights of despair
I miss you all so much, I sometimes wish we hadn't met.
The sad irony to this wish, is that I wouldn't be here without you.
You've pulled me back from the darkness, My sisters and my brother.
But how many times do I turn my back on you?

No matter how many times I got you angry
You would always forgive me.
It broke my heart to do some of the things I did
But I felt I had no choice,
Nothing was the same in my life,
Friendship, people who understood, these were things unknown to me.

I've always tried to be the guy you can tell your problems to,
I want to listen more than to speak, its all I know to do.
But I've left the loop, and too much has changed for me to return.
It seems that after all of this, the indestructible bridge was indeed..burned.

#3
Tell me Angel, what is your plan?
Sent here from above, to lend a helping hand?
Or is it something so much more?
Something unknown, waiting on a distant shore.

Tell me Angel, why do you care?
Is it only because I was the one who was there?
Do you feel you owe me some strange due?
If anyone deserves something, that anyone is you.

Tell me Angel, why does it hurt?
My senses are dulled, my favourite food is like Dirt.
Why do I feel the pain, wanting the first word of the day to be your name.
Tell me Angel, do you feel the same?

Tell me Angel, how long will you wait?
Constant barriers thrown up, keeping us away.
Let them send their armies to stop me, let them see what I'll do.
No mountain, no river, will stop me getting to you.

Tell me Angel, will 'we' ever be?
That's something that we'll have to wait and see.
Its what I want, with all of my heart.
As long as you're my Angel, we'll never be apart.

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# 3 got all the more amazing because I was listening to "I wish I had an Angel" (By NightWish) when I read it.

Good on ya mate.

I might put some of mine up as well. It's not that good but my English teacher thought it was so *shrug*

[rubixracoon]

So what I really like is that with every start of the line you start off with a new concept, you know? The concept of a 'plan' then it goes off to a concept of 'care' and 'hurt'. I really like reading other people's writings... If you have anymore put them up. They are a joy to read for me.