My OC...

[komai]

This is my first OC so I don't need nasty critics with nasty some nasty words.

Name: Komai.
Nickname: Komai.
Organization XIII or Dark XII Nickname: N/A.

Age: 14-15 in appearance. (Approximately 600 years.)

Gender: Male.

Species: Human.

Position: Evil.
Organization XIII or Dark XII Position: N/A.

Power: Unlike the Heartless who steal people's heart, which makes that person fade into the darkness, Komai steals people's soul which puts the person into a deep slumber until a soul is filled in the empty space, their own soul or not. Komai can also extract the memories from the soul entirely, which means if the soul is returned to it's rightful body or any body, the memories of that soul well be lost. Komai can "consume" a person's soul, which allows him to live that x number of years more, basically making him eternal.
Magic: -
Stopga
Slowga

Weapon: Scythe. Curved wooden staff. Larger blade is on the top right of the staff. The material of the blade is called, Sol-Steel. Name of the scythe is named, Soul-Steal. (Play on words.)

Picture(optional):

Appearance: Komai has grey hair that nearly covers his wolf-like eyes. His eyes are jet black. He has a all white cloak with small, slim black streaks running through it, like blood through a vein. He also wears chains aroud his cloak. Near his waist there is a horn-like jug which he keeps his limited amount of souls in, for emergencies only.

Personality: Komai has cocky personality... with a strange sense of humor. When Komai is losing to an opponent, he becomes intrigued by that character and what their soul is "worth". Komai would never retreat unless his horn-jug is empty and cannot "consume" any nearby souls, or if he would want to study the target for further encounters. In dire circumstances, Komai would sacrifice a comrade, or even one of his closest friends, to survive.

Original World: Konno Fields.
Current Residing World: Traverse Town.

History/Background: Komai was always evil from beginning to end. Komai has never meet his parents, nor does he have any interest in doing so. Komai raised himself living in Konno Fields, only showing how independent he is. In Konno Fields, he only had three true friends, and that was all he wanted. As a child, Komai often played harmful pranks on his classmates, as he found their misery pleasurable. At a more serious age, Komai started killing residents with his family heirloom, Soul-Steal. Unknowing of it's ability, Komai went to slaughter anyone who he could find, laughing as they fell to their knees. After killing countless people, Komai stopped, as others ran and hid. When he turned back to go home, he saw countless souls floating in the air, like a swarm of fireflies. One soul drifted into Komai's chest, and he felt so much more youthful than before. He collected as many souls as he could in his jug he used for holding spring water. After "consuming" so many souls, his magic abilities raised devastatingly, in time he could send his cells one-by-one to another place. He called it "evaporation".

Role Playing Sample: "Konno Fields", an endless plain of light blue grass, resembling an ocean if you will. Komai, one of the four residents left of Konno Fields, was laying in a large area of the Plains, before a large metal sword came slashing from sky. Komai drew out his scythe having no emotions on his face, but a rather large yawn, and clashed the sword, holding it in place. The wielder of the flying sword said, in a rather harsh voice, "Damn it...". Although the wielder was angry, it was as if he expected this events to happen.

Komai drew his scythe back and looked back at the sky as he smirked,"Nice try, Ioshu." Ioshu, the wielder of the heavy sword (Solemn Razor) seemed to be deeply offended by this comment. "Where's Ehbi and Tisuken?" Komai asked in a more serious voice. "Hell if I know" Ioshu grunted. Komai raised his scythe near Ioshu's face and smiled as he said, "Find them."

Without question, Ioshu turned and ran to retrieve the two missing characters. Several minutes later, Ioshu came back walking very calmly with two small children one boy (Ehbi), one girl (Tisuken), struggling to be released from his grasp. When Ioshu reached Komai, he was still sitting in the same spot. Ioshu dropped the two kids rather roughly to the ground, near Komai's feet. Komai jumped to his feet and smiled, "Ah! There you are!" Ehbi and Tisuken jumped to their feet, looking at Komai as they trembled.

They managed to scramble the words with fear in their voice, "W-What do you want, K-Komai?" "Y-yeah?" Komai got on one of his knees and patted Ehbi's head as Tisuken cried aloud. He turned to the tearful Tisuken and said, "Now, now. We all die sometime, my dear." Ehbi threw himself in front of Tisuken, guarding her. Komai seemed, surprised. "Hmm? You would rather go first?" Ehbi then drew his sword (Vengeful Blade) and stood in fighting position. Komai covered his mouth and chuckled, "Very well." and with one quick slice of his scythe, Ehbi fell to his knees dropping his sword, as his body slowly disappeared from top to bottom. Tisuken was now crying hysterically as she watched her brother fade away.

A small white orb (Soul) from Ehbi's resting place rised to Komai's chest. Komai than sighed of relief. He than walked toward Tisuken as she stumbled backwards, still crying. She looked up and saw Komai walk toward her, she picked herself up and drew her own weapon (Selfless Saber) and pointed at Komai in a clumsy position.

Komai continued to walk toward her as he laughed at her posture. She looked at Komai for a moment, and then dropped her saber, and dropped her head crying. Komai looked at her with a straight face and said, "Good. Your death shall be much less painful than his." as he looked at Ehbi's sword. He struck Tisuken with his scythe vertically as she faded from bottom to top. Tisuken's soul rised, similiar to Ehbi's, only this time Komai collected her's in his horn-jug, for future use.

After snapping his neck, he looked at Ioshu, still standing in the same spot as before, watching the horrendous act with not even a single tear in his eye. Komai walked up to Ioshu, but he did not move a muscle. Komai smiled on the right-side of his face as he raised his scythe slowly. "Goodbye" Komai said as he struck Ioshu down and again put another innocent soul into his horn-jug.

Komai slowly walked to the south as bit-by-bit of his body evaporated from his feet to his head. When all except his head was visible, he said, "Goodbye... Friends." He than started to reappear bit-by-bit in Traverse Town, still walking south until his whole body was visible. He looked up at the sky and said while he had a wicked smile on his face, "Welcome home... Komai."

[Bluey.:*]

Hmm... I'm not really sure about a soul stealer. I'll run it by the admin.

You're very good at role playing though. So feel free to create another profile while this one is being reviewed so you can role play. =]

[Ellie who has 0%]

Taking it upon myself to assist with profiles, I've done it before and been trusted to do so, and it's needed. Any problems. PM me.

I will state right now that we have a rule associating with character deaths and needing permission from the rper to conduct it. In short, you're soul eating tendency won't be at your will at the rpers. With that in itself, I don't know if you want to revise your character, since a key element that molds him is going to be under lock and key unless permission is given.

Also to be sure that you're still interested. Make a post within a week.

[Ellie who has 0%]

Rejected for not posting in a timely manner