Nightfury WIP

[nightfury]

Name: Marcello Knight

Nickname (optional): Nightfury

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Position: Good

Powers: He has abilities that most humans don’t have because some of these were presented to him by the Gods. He also knows aikido, karate and a little magic.

Keen Senses: This ability allows Nightfury to be more aware of what’s around him. Specifically this gives him sharper hearing and sight. No one can really sneak up on him because most of the time because he is using this ability.

Light Flare: This ability was presented by the Gods and allows Nightfury to emit a bright ray of light from his body and it temporarily blinds the enemy for 10 seconds.

Tornado Kick: This allows Nightfury to spin around fast enough to create a small tornado around him while he kicks his enemies until the tornado fades. This ability does a normal amount of damage and doesn’t last very long.

Elemental Punch: This gives Nightfury the ability to punch with any element infused in the punch or he and infuse a punch with all the elements. He can use this ability 4 times before his magic completely runs out.

Fury Punch: This allows Nightfury to rain down punches on enemies with tremendous speed and accuracy. This tires him out with every use but if the enemy is hit in a vital area, it may do critical damage.

Call of the wild: Another ability presented by the Gods, this ability allows Nightfury to summon wolves and bears from the forest; Falcons and Vultures from the atmosphere to help him fight any enemy that he is faced with.

Spirit Drive: The final ability presented to him by the Gods, this allows Marcello focus and enter the spirit realm to retrieve the dead soul? He can only resurrect him/her if there spirit is willing to be resurrected. He can only do this for 15 seconds.

Weapon: He currently has none.

Picture (optional): See Avatar.

Appearance:
Nightfury is exactly 6’. He has medium length silky hair with a spiky nature to it. He wears a tank top that’s not too tight but not too baggyish either with a black jacket over it and wears a black biker’s glove on his right hand and a red glove on his other. For his bottoms, he likes to wears black skinny jeans with a leather belt and a chain hanging from his left hip. As for shoes, He likes to wear white high-tops, but he will occasionally wear skate shoes.

Personality:
Nightfury is pure of heart and soul and definitely knows the right decisions to make. He is a very chill person when it comes to being in an argument. He can be relied on for anything. He can be great help in any situation no matter how big or small. As for and urgent situation, he just stops what he’s doing to help anybody in need.
He likes to joke around a lot when he is talking to people and not doing anything of importance, but when it’s time to be serious you can definitely count on Nightfury. When he is mad, upset or sad he’ll have a tendency to hit inanimate objects though he doesn’t do this in front of people. He is a very kind person and very caring as well. He is also very energetic and enthusiastic. He even helps with the little and less important things that need to be done.


Original World: Sythia

Current Residing World: Twilight Town

History/Background:
Not much is known about Nightfury’s childhood from birth to age 3 other than him being abandoned as a child. He was taken in by the citizens of Hollow Bastion. Over the years, Nightfury has met many wonderful people and made lots of friend, which some of them have taught him a lot. Some even taught Nightfury how to fight and ever since he has become a better warrior. By 13 he was presented the abilities Call of the wild, Spirit Caller, and Light Flare, by the Gods themselves, which has helped him on his journey to defeat evil.
The reason for the presentation of these gifts is because a couple months before, a little innocent girl was trapped in a cave surrounded by mountain lions. He knew that because there were so many, he could easily be killed, but he went all out anyways to save her. The Gods had noticed that no matter how big the situation was, he was always willing to help anybody in need and so one day, while Nightfury was meditating on a boulder by a lake, the Gods came down from the heavens in a brilliant gold chariot and said to him, “We have come before you in hopes of accepting our blessing. For you have shown great courage, having a strong heart, and always helping someone in a time of need. Nightfury, will you accept our blessing?” All Nightfury could do is nod and the Gods have chosen him to wield such abilities.
By the time he was 16 he became a third degree black belt in karate and aikido. And By 17 he learned the rest of his abilities on his own through mediation and hard work. When he was 19 his world was destroyed by heartless and he ended up in traverse town. He escaped this world and move to Twilight Town for its peace and tranquility.

Role Playing Sample:
The storm raged as Nightfury meditated in his Zen garden. Although it was raining, he heard complete silence like there was nothing around. No rain…no source of life. He was in his own world. He sat in the rain thinking to himself, What did I do wrong in my practice? What went right? These were questions that had to be answered from within.
But then, Nightfury’s eyes opened in a flash and was dodging kunai knives and throwing stars. Nightfury looked around his Zen garden. He stared at the tree were the weapons hit. Was someone out there trying to kill him or scare him off? Then before he knew it, he was dodging more kunai and throwing stars. He looked up and saw a couple ninjas.
They had fled from the scene, but Nightfury was in pursuit of them. They set traps, but Nightfury was way ahead of them thanks to keen senses. He was tired of this pursuit. Then he shouted, “CALL OF THE WILD!” Then a couple falcons, swooped down and attacked the ninjas with their powerful claws leaving behind a trail of blood.
Nightfury was tired and had stop where he was. He didn’t feel like chasing them anymore and decided to turn around, go home and get some sleep to only continue to seek the ninjas that had attacked last night.

[Ellie who has 0%]

Hey nightfury,

Long time no see buddy. So let's see what we gooot heeere. Alright your profile is incomplete.

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Also a sneek peak of needed corrections:

1.) You will have to use a different plot device for his power boon. The only Gods acknowledged here are the Greek in Olympus, which would be considered canons. Also it would be strange to be in contact with Greek gods..and learn karate, an asian martial arts, >> in ancient Greece. So find another medium.

2.) Light Flare - in a rpg based on text, we can't depict anything by time and seconds, because time is easily manipulated by the rper, which can lead to god modding. That's why we depict it by posts, so how long is someone hindered by the Light Flare?

3.) Elemental Punch- What elements do your character know? Does he knows Fire, Blizzard, Thunder, Water, Terra? He technically already linked to Aero with his Thunder Kick and Light with Light Flare.

4.) Call of the Wild- How about you give him specific animals to summon? If we get technical...I doubt there are bears in Twilight Town...and there's hardly a forested world that would give you much help animal-wise. So you can have sentient spiritual animals (like the game Pocahontas looooove that game) and such.

5.) Spirit Drive- Find something else than dead people. >> Seriously who would you summon...in here? Think of something different that isn't so questional and godmoddish. Also I advice to make this a Limit

[Ellie who has 0%]

This is rejected for not editing in a timely manner. From my memory the WIP status only last for a week