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Magic:Halina relies on Magic than her physical strengths, and she uses offense spells more than defense. Summoning takes a bit more concentration than her other spells because they take more energy.
Fire Storm: the top spell Halina uses when going up against huge groups,and can be used only once. It summons fire balls size of golf balls from the heavens,like a fiery meteor shower. She must wait at least four posts before using it again.
Blizzard: she relies on this spell a lot trying to freeze her enemies,and has mastered it. Casting limit; five to seven times.
Aura: uses this special energy from within the body and explodes in an impulse wave. it takes a few posts to charge up,and can only be used two more times. Bad thing of using this spell is that it takes a quarter of both her magic,and life,which can harm her if she uses too much of it. Takes at least two to four posts to charge depending how much energy is used.
Absorb: is the only other healing spell that she uses. It takes a small quarter of the enemies life and gives it to Halina.(can only be used once every two posts)
Swordsmanship: she only thing physically good at,and has mastered.
Weapon: Halina only uses her sword Darkslayer but she also has a back up dagger in her boot. Darkslayer is sliver with three black orbs,and ancient writing of magic on the sheath of the sword. (its a spell of protection it makes huge bubble-like shield around the user,and only lasts for three posts only against Heartless and Nobodies, for Darkslayer was made from Halina's father whom was a blacksmith and the orbs he put on the handle is able to release Light-like energy on Heartless. (Fo Lei Oi Wou Sou Io Fyre Ion Oi Shia Oi Mai Oi Tai Kia lela . translation: Let The Beautiful Soul Be Free,To The Door To Light To Spread Her Wings.) She can use the spell of protection only five times then has to recharge it for another three posts.
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Appearance: Halina is tall at least five eight,and in spite the fact she's skinny she's very strong. She has blueish black hair with bangs,her hair puled back in a braid with a dark green ribbon, silver shortless sleeve jacket with a hood. With sky blue mid long sleeved shirt,with black skirt a little pouch on the hip with shorts that is two inches above the knees. Brown hiking boots,with leather fingerless gloves, and a choker with a fang. Halina has sea blue eyes, kinda tannish skin, a scarf tied to her left arm,and its plain red and black.
Personality:Halina has always had been a lone wolf,and always being judged by others. In spite of her small aggressive behavior she is rather kind hearted and shy. She's rather quiet and stays out of the way of things but when it came with bulling or fights she defends with no hesitation even though she hates fighting. She can be bit girly at times, like when she sees something cute or is having an awsome time,she is just more of a boyish punk kinda person. She rarely ever shows her cheerful side, she only shows it to her loved ones or people she knows well. She usually follows her instincts and bit of her gut,she has little patience but she gets bit in tense when she gets angry. She can go bit far when angry she sometimes don't know her own strength,when she finally chills she usually goes off alone without a word. She dislikes fighting and noise,and fears the dark. Her hobbies are;Spell Casting, reading books both spell books & fantasy story books, star gazing,writing in her journal,and meditating. She loves improving her magic,and sword,she loves to go to new places, she loves rainy summer days, and take a look a round even though she doesn't like leaving Twilight Town her only home.
Original World:Twilight Town Current World: Traverse Town
History: Halina didn't remember her family what's so ever, all she remembered was a loud bang. She stood in the open busy street in Twilight Town with a confused face. She wandered off for hours and hide in the tunnels when it got dark. She woke up the next day in a bed,a man with jet black hair with a studious kinda look about him. He turned from his book to smile at Halina,"Your awake Halina. I'm your Godfather,William." Halina didn't know what to expect she just nodded and looked down with a depressive mood since. William was rather talktive, he says he's a magician and an engineer. He learned how to use magic from a Wizard from another world,"He taught a few Special students but I was second best "Halina asked why who was his top best student but William just smiled mysteriously. Four years later after her Ninth birthday, Halina meet this girl Solia she was quiet but cheerful,they soon became good friends,later on Solia meet a guy at the library name Ash. Halina walked back from school and stared out to the setting sun,wondering about her parents 'til William told her over dinner,"your parents might still be alive.. They're lost out in Other Worlds." Halina made a vow to find her parents,and return with them to Twilight Town. William smiled and promised her she'll find them,and began to teach her Swordsmanship,and the using of Magic. Eight years has past and Halina learned to master both Magic and her Blade.
Dark,black shadows moving in the darkness... barely able to see them with there yellow eyes glowing in the dark.. Halina stood in her PJs, when she heard screaming from down stairs.Halina ran down stairs her body intensed she panted in worry and fear,"William!!!" she called as she went to William's side. He was fighting off these grey creatures with a familiar symbol.. He fell from a strong blow from the creatures. Halina ran and muttered the written spell on DarkSlayer. "Lei Oi Wou Sou Io Fyre Ion Oi Shia Oi Mai Oi Tai Kia lela..(translation in Weapon) A wall made of Light spread between them and the grey creatures,they backed up from it looking hungry. "Go to the basement... They're coming..." Halina dragged him down the basement with her,as these grey creatures followed. "Nobodies............" the dreams fades William shook Halina awake,"You were screaming... Did you had a nightmare-" Halina hugged him and cryed,"I saw the future...It was horrible.." William signs and hugs her back comforting her.
It was her eighteeth birthday, Ash and Solia came gave her a new sword and spell book,William gave her his old photo album and a journal. "Happy Birthday!" Halina smiled and blew out the candles. Later on that night she woke up,from a loud banging and yelling of spells from down stairs. Dark,black shadows moving in the darkness... barely able to see them with there yellow eyes glowing in the dark.. Halina stood in her PJs, when she heard screaming from down stairs.Halina ran down stairs her body intensed she panted in worry and fear,"William!!!" she called as she went to William's side. He was fighting off these grey creatures with a familiar symbol.. He fell from a strong blow from the creatures. Halina ran and muttered the written spell on DarkSlayer. "Lei Oi Wou Sou Io Fyre Ion Oi Shia Oi Mai Oi Tai Kia lela.." A wall made of Light spread between them and the grey creatures they backed up from it looking hungry. "Go to the basement... They're coming..." Halina dragged him down the basement with her,as these grey creatures followed. "Nobodies....."William pushed Halina in Night Star portal of Darkness and Light. "William!" the last thing she saw was William's smile and tears in his eyes...
Role Playing Sample: Halina tossed and turned in her sleep,she saw black things moving in the dark with yellow eyes... "William!" she yelled out in fear. William came in to comfort her,"..Same dream..?" Halina nodded under her bedhead blue-black hair,her hands shook she was drenched in sweat. She felt herself,she still worn her dark blue striped PJs. William hugged her,"It's okay honey.. why don't you come with me. I got a surprised for you." As he guided her through the dark to the basement. "As a magician,and a engineer I made something you might see intresting." He smiled Halina grinned,inspite the fact he works in a library he does a lot of engineering combined with magic. Halina gasped in surprise,William her God father made a Portal made of both Light and Dark. "Night Star, my latest creation. It's able to take to other worlds.."his words echoed in Halina ears with excitement and anxious. Halina went to get a better look at it when William said in warning,"Mania. No you can't go and try it yet either. It's still a model, it needs work before you go and looking for your parents." Halina grunted she didn't like it when he called her by her real name. She looked at it more closely and saw the same ancient writing from her Sword Darkslayer,she smiled proudly.
"Fine. I'm going to practice my skills until sundown." and was gone. She went out on top of the buildings hitting some bulls eyes with her spells and slice some dummies. "Blizzard!" she pointed at the farthest target. It exploded in to hailstones, Halina turned to swiped at a crack behind her. Whatever it was it was gone. No trace of anyone,Halina listened to her gut and left the roof. She told William what happen,"I'm sure it was nothing.." but he looked both grim and...? Scared? She shook her thoughts. "Ok Will. I'm going to bed good night." She looked at the window when she left dinner. Its stormy.. I got a horrible feeling.. she drifted to sleep unaware of what will happen in the next three hours...
Three hours later...
Dark black shadows moving in the darkness... barely able to see them with there yellow eyes glowing in the dark.. Halina stood in her PJs, when she heard screaming from down stairs.Halina ran down stairs her body intensed she panted in worry and fear,"William!!!" she called as she went to William's side. He was fighting off these grey creatures with a familiar symbol.. He fell from a strong blow from the creatures. Halina ran and muttered the written spell on DarkSlayer. "Lei Oi Wou Sou Io Fyre Ion Oi Shia Oi Mai Oi Tai Kia lela.." A wall made of Light spread between them and the grey creatures,they backed up from it looking hungry. "Go to the basement... They're coming..." Halina dragged him down the basement with her,as these grey creatures followed. "Nobodies....."William pushed Halina in Night Star portal of Darkness and Light. "William!" the last thing she saw was William's smile and tears in his eyes... Halina opened her eyes,she jumped up as her memory came back to her. She broke back in to tears,William....she moaned. She shook her head,Get a hold of yourself! No need to be crying, He'll be fine. he has to be... She got up looking around worried but took a deep breathe and walked out of the ally. It was quiet too quiet,so quiet it sent chills down her spine and put her on her guard. She was in the District,of another world... The words sank in,leaving the mixture of feelings; excitement,intenseness,and sadness. I hope to find my parents..No. I KNOW they're out there. I know it... Halina felt awkward walking out in the streets,it just didn't seem real. She try shake the feelings off by looking in the shops. She walked back to district one,and wondering were is everyone. Then she saw a Moogle she ran up to him,"Excuse me but we am I...?" He turned and said simply" Traverse Town,for thoughs has lost there home worlds." Halina nodded,thinking about what she was told. Were everyone lost there home world... Before she could think any further she was interrupted,"Halina!!!" she turned and was squished from a hug. It was Solia "Halina,I what are you doing here?" Halina backed up some,"... William sent me through a portal... we were over runned by N-nobodies..." Solia padded her on the back,"It's all right.. I'm sure he'd fine." nods,"Why are you here?" Solia made a face and scratched her head,the kinda face you make as if you are stuck or got caught doing something. "Hahaha...funny you ask.. Okay fine I'll tell you. you see me and Ash is well... is 'different'. He was able to make a portal with magic and go were ever. And well in the process these guys with black cloaks attacked,saying stuff like 'Bye Brother' or 'Traitor'. Then he made the portals but we we went through seperated and I landed here. So far if I'm right I've been stranded here for seven days twelve hours ten minutes and six seconds." Halina sat down her head was swimming she gazed up at the starry night sky,I will come for you Mom,Dad. And William,I promise I'll do anything to bring you back. I swear it...
Deleted this profile's "double". Apparently you posted it twice by accident XD.
Anyway, let's get started shall we?
Powers: How many posts does Aura take to charge up? How many posts must she wait to use Absorb again? Also, if Guardian Angel is Mania's ultimate spell I expect her to take a bit longer to execute it.
Weapon: Does the writing on Darkslayer mean something? Does it give the sword any other powers under certain circumstances?
Personality: It does not meet our 175 word requirement. Expand please.
History: It does not meet our 500 word requirement. Expand please. Hint: Explain where William learned his powers. Also, Heartless are not really common in Twilight Town; most of the sightings are Nobody ones.
RP Sample: It does not meet our 500 word requirement. Expand please.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Feb 1, 2011 19:18:10 GMT -4
Hello Mira17, I am Ellie and I will be assisting you with your profile. Sorry for the delay.
To make everything easier, please double space your paragraphs, because this word block is hard and annoying to read. This will make this more smoother.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Feb 2, 2011 15:43:55 GMT -4
Oh dear I didn't mean double space your entire profile, but the paragraphs so there's a space between them.
Like Below.
Powers:
Magic: Halina relies on Magic than her Physical strengths, she uses offense spells more than defense. Summoning takes a bit more concentration than her other spells because they take more energy.
Fire Storm: the top spell Halina uses when going up against huge groups,and can be used only once. It summons fire balls size of golf balls from the heavens,like a fiery meteor shower.
Blizzard: she relies on this spell a lot trying to freeze her enemies,and has mastered it.
Aura: uses this special energy from within the body and explodes in an impulse wave. it takes a few posts to charge up,and can only be used two more times. Bad thing of using this spell is that it takes a quarter of life. Takes at least two to our posts to charge depending how much energy is used.
Absorb: is the only other healing spell(other than Cure but thats obvious) that she uses. It takes a small quarter of the enemies life and gives it to Halina.(can only be used once every few posts)
Summoning: Halina only summoning spell is Guardian Angel, which is her ultimate spell. It takes at least three to five posts for her summon her. Guardian Angel comes from the heavens with large golden sword,she brings in huge massive winds with her wings. she only last to three to four posts in battle. And can be used once.
Swordsmanship: she only thing physically good at,and has mastered.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Feb 3, 2011 18:04:53 GMT -4
XD you know you shouldn't work when sleeppeeeh
Powers;;
Fire storm;; how many posts must she wait before recasting?
Blizzard;; how many times can she cast this before needing to recharge from mystic fatigue?
Aura;; Be definite on how many posts she must wait so it can be consistent throughout all the times she uses it. Also define quarter of 'life'. Do you mean it harms her...or just drain her magic?
Absorb --> (Drain);; Remove the tidbit about Cure, since your character doesn't have it. If so it should be listed. Also be definite in the number of post she must wait...once every 3...once ever 2...?
Summoning;; In this rpg, angels do not exist or is permitted. They are seen as a Christianic figures and the only gods acknowledge are those on Olympus.
Weapon;; Darkslayer;; How does the protection spell work? Is it like a shell spell or a protect spell? How does it only affect Heartless and Nobodies and not anyone else? Does she have to enchant it, if so how many times can it be used?
Grammatical errors;; Captizalition;; over 8 (whether you need to capitalize or somethings shouldn't be) Comma splices;; (misusage of commas) over 10 Example: Halina relies on Magic than her Physical strengths,she uses offense spells more than defense.
A comma alone cannot be used to combine two sentences. It would need a confuction. Also to combine two sentences by a comma they must be complete thoughts, subject and predicate.
Halina relies on magic than her physical strength, and she uses offensive spells more than defensive.
Also you need to space out the paragraphs in your history. We shall clean-up the problemas above the history before moving onto your history and rp sample.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Feb 8, 2011 13:09:51 GMT -4
Alrighty then *cracks knuckles*
1.) Omit summoning because it really isn't summoning anything she's just using her magic mana.
- Change her summoning to a Limit also give it an element alignment, because I don't see your character...move celestial bodies to the earth. Either make it a fire based attack or blizzard since it seems to be the only elements she know of. Also as a limit it can only be conducted in dire situation and most likely once.
2.) Aura- Be definite on how many posts she must wait so it can be consistent throughout all the times she uses it. Also define quarter of 'life'. Do you mean it harms her...or just drain her magic?
3.) Darkslayer- how many times can she use the proection? Also you still have some grammatical issues you haven't edited yet.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Feb 17, 2011 14:02:30 GMT -4
You have shown the following: 1.) Lack of use of capitalization 2.) Comma splices - using them when it's unneccesary, which creates fragments For example: it takes a few posts to charge up,and can only be used two more times.
//Firstly "it" should be capitalized; also you DO NOT use a comma with a conjuction (and, but, or etc) unless you are combining two sentences together. That means "can only be used two more times" should be able to stand on its own as a sentence, but it can't because it is a fragment.
Correction: It takes a few post to charge up and can only be used two more times.
//Examples like these are litered throughout your entire profile. I advise you read over it thoroughly to fix them.//
- Under her powers remove the tidbit about summoning since she doesn't summon anymore. - Do not make me repeat this again; I will reject this profile if everything I told you to do...isn't done. I have said multiple times that for Absorb you should give her a DEFINTE post count recharge not a RANGE. To avoid this again, MAKE her have a FOUR POST recharge Duration. -Also change Absorb name to Drain, because that's a known spell in the FF franchisement that works the same.
Weapon:: Knock of the post duration and leave it to be only conduct 5 times a thread.
History;; - Try to chart Kingdom Hearts CANON events with your character was roaming. Where was she during the events of KH1 and KH2. This helps us ground and see how your character relates to the storyline. - How old was your character when she arrived to Twilight Town? Also how does she even gets amnesia. We don't permit unexplained out of nowhere amnesia. - How does her godfather...ended up in Twilight Town? This is just a random element of a lost child from a lost world...happened to stumble on her godfather, who she was never aware of. How does her godfather even know who she is? Also why would a girl with amnesia...who arrived to a world she doesn't know and would most likely be scared ...to merely go along with this 'god father'. How did this godfather who MUST have interacted with her parents at her native world...ended up in a different world learning from a mysterious wizard (Who I hope your not connotating to Yen Sid and being second to Mickey Mouse.) - Nobodies attack? Nobodies do not function the same as Heartless. They really didn't truly terrorize Twilight Town like how their counterpart would, since Nobodies are under order of the Organization. Instead Nobodies were really browsing mysterious figures, so they wouldn't be a good plot device...for your character to have a random premonition (which I will ask about...how your character can just...SEE THE FUTUUUUUURE) and be forced into Traverse Town. If you want her in Traverse Town...than she can simply BE froom Traverse Town...or be dumped in Traverse Town.
- Dialouge;; Dialouge could be at the following: the beginning of narrative paragraph, the end of the narrative paragaph, or have it's own. Example:
History: Halina didn't remember her family what's so ever, all she remembered was a loud bang. She stood in the open busy street in Twilight Town with a confused face. She wandered off for hours and hide in the tunnels when it got dark. She woke up the next day in a bed,a man with jet black hair with a studious kinda look about him. He turned from his book to smile at Halina,"Your awake Halina. I'm your Godfather,William."
Halina didn't know what to expect she just nodded and looked down with a depressive mood since. William was rather talktive, he says he's a magician and an engineer. He learned how to use magic from a Wizard from another world,"He taught a few Special students but I was second best "