Solaris "Sol" Callaway [A]

[lunardevian]

Name: Solaris Callaway


Nickname: Sol (Prefers to go by this name.)


Age: 16


Gender: Male


Species: Werewolf


Position: Neutral (Though he can go either Good or Bad if given the right incentive or has a reason to.)


Powers:
Wolf Transition: Sol has three forms he can use:

Human Form: Sol's default form which he stays in throughout the day and night and while in combat.

Werewolf Form: This form can be triggered at will due to Sol being a naturally born werewolf but he still shifts into this form during a full moon, he uses this form for combat and will likely use it in every fight, if he doesn't start off with this form then he will save it for a dire situation. While Sol is a werewolf he switches to his fangs and claws instead for combat. This form is his strongest as his strength increase by a considerate amount, his speed also gains a slight boost. Since he loses his swords and has to rely on claws he can't rely on abilities that require his swords, however he can use Bloody Tempest by substituting his claws as swords, although the attack is not as strong, he also can still use Dark Resonance, Shadow Streak, Impulse Wave, and Dark Fira. If Sol takes enough damage, even enough to become knocked out, in this form he reverts back to human. (4 post length wait until able to transform back if he is knocked out of this form.)

Wolf Form: This form can also be triggered at will but Sol loses use of his Devil White and Angel Black and most of his other attacks and has to rely on fangs and claws. This form is Sol's fastest as his speed is increased more than his strength so this form is used mostly for traveling around a world. Due to having to be on all fours in this form Sol can only use Dark Fira, Cura, and the field form of Impulse Wave. If he takes enough damage in this form he will revert back to human. (3 post length wait until able to transform back if he is knocked out of this form.)

Heightened Body and Sense: Since Sol is a werewolf, in human form his speed, strength, agility, and senses are slightly more powerful than a normal humans.


Regular Abilities:
Hand to Hand Combat: Sol has plenty of combat experience and training without the use of weapons and has become a trained brawler.

Sword Mastery: Since training at the age of 5 in the way of the sword and receiving warrior training at age 13, Sol is an expert at the art of the sword and has learned to even wield two blades at once.


Dark Resonance: Sol has control of the darkness that sleeps inside his own heart and can channel it into Devil White and Angel Black and even his own claws and fists. (Last 4 posts, Recharge Length: 5 posts

Shadow Streak: Sol stretches either one or both of his arms and from his hands a dark aura surrounds them, then streaks of darkness fly out and strike the enemy piercing through them. These streaks can reach about 15 to 25ft and Sol can bend around the enemy or environment as they fly towards their target. (Recharge length: 2 posts)

Impulse Wave: This is a simple shockwave fired from his palm that hardly does any damage but pushes away the enemy, Sol can also create a circular shockwave with a diameter of 10ft but requires longer recharge time. (Regular Wave: 1 post recharge, Field Wave: 2 post recharge)

Chaotic Rose: Sol infuses Devil White and Angel Black with darkness and repeatedly stabs his enemy ten times with both blades and ends with an upward slash lifting the enemy into the air. (Recharge length: 1 post)

Bloody Tempest: Sol somersaults towards the enemy while spinning with Devil White and Angel Black infused with darkness in hand and slices through the target, however after the attack Sol is left dazed for 1 post. (Recharge length: 2 posts)

Chaos Duo Raid: Similar to a Strike Raid, Sol engulfs Devil White and Angel Black in a dark aura and launches them spinning towards the enemy. (Recharge Length: 2 Posts)

Cura: Intermediate healing magic able to heal medium size cuts and wounds. (Recharge Length: 2 Posts)

Dark Fira: A medium sized firball made of darkness. (Recharge Length: 3 Posts)

Limit Break

Devil's Wildflower:
This can only be used in his werewolf form, Sol's entire body is surrounded by an aura of darkness and he rushes the enemy and slashes them with his claws seven times, then the aura his focused into his hands as he unleashes one final slash of both claws in a X shaped fashion leaving a black scar of darkness on the enemy. Sol then releases a barrage of five Dark Firas with the final blast igniting the scar on the enemy and causes an explosion. (Can only be used once in battle.)



Weapon: Devil White and Angel Black (Twin Long swords)
These two long swords were created by his mother who had made them originally for his father but handed down to him when his parents were killed. Each start out as a blade that splits into two near the start of the hilt, creating a gap to catch other swords and a small handgaurd with the extra blade. Originally these two had no names but Sol decided to give them names after him and his brothers personalities, Angel Black is completely black from the hilt down to the tip of the blade and Devil White is completely white from the hilt down to the tip of the blade. He hids the two of them in the realm of darkness until he needs them.

Picture: N/A


Appearance: Sol may be a battle hardened werewolf but his build might not show that, he blames it on having a high metabolism, he stands at 6'1 feet tall at 170lbs, he's lean but is built pretty well, having a decent build of muscle for a skinny kid. His hair is snow white and comes down to his shoulders in spikes which seem to part diagonally to the left in the front and three larger spikes to the left side of his head and one in the middle on his forehead, each large sipke coming down to eye level. His eyes are a deep crimson red and he has black tribal like tattoos running down his arm to his elbow, across his chest, underneath the ribcage and one around his belly button. His clothing choice is quite simple, and his clothes are specially tailored to stretch while in werewolf form save his shoes, wearing a plain white hoodie with torn off selves and no shirt underneath and black shorts with black and white sneakers along with a pair of black fingerless gloves. His only feature that stands out is his white furred wolf ears that replace his human ears and his white fluffy tail.

While in werewolf form he takes the shape of a humanoid white wolf, his eye color remains the same and his hair now reaches down his back stopping a little ways above his tail, he will sometimes discard his hoodie, even though it can stretch during the shift, and shoes to prevent them from tearing, .

In wolf form he discards all his clothing and assumes the form of a complete snow-white wolf.


Personality: Calling Sol a wild child would be an understatement, while the darkness inside him hasn't taken his sanity away Sol's emotions often have a more animalistic side to them, an example would be growling at someone for getting him mad or wagging his tail or howling in joy when he's seriously happy. He also carries a free spirited attitude along with a small sense of curiosity, open mindedness, and adventure. He cherishes friendship and bonds above all else and acts like a guardian to any of his closest friends when he's around them making sure their not only safe from harm but that they also feel safe and protected as well as happy. Being born a fighter and heavily trained in the art of battle makes Sol search out a challenger every once in a blue moon, or even more frequent, though he would never turn down a challenge no matter how tough his opponent, which might make him seem a bit crazy but he hardly lets any of that kind of talk about him affect him in any way.


Original World: Sequir
Current World: Twilight Town

History: Solaris was born to a pair of nomadic werewolves along with his twin brother Galleon in the world of Sequir, a world where half of the population was comprised of werewolves. At birth, Sol's heart had a small flicker of darkness that came and went but the innocent heart of a child kept it in check and Sol managed to live a normal life, where he trained with his father and brother in the art of combat and took and interest in swordsmanship, until he was 6 years old. One night a group of rouge werewolves attacked his family, his parents were killed and his brother taken by the attackers, as a few wolves approach Sol to take him with them he ran but they gave chase, he went to grab his fathers swords, the flicker of darkness in his heart slowly growing from fear and anger. When he managed to grab a hold of them the wolves chasing him caught up and battered him around until Sol was unconscious from the pain, afterwards the wolves decided to leave him to die on his own. When he came back to his senses his parents and brother were gone and he was left all alone, he realized that he needed to move but he sore he would find his brother and be reunited with him, so he took his fathers blades and set off to live on his own.

After months of aimlessly wandering the world he collapsed on the border of a territory belonging to a small pack of werewolves who found the unconscious Sol and took him in. While recovering Sol met someone who changed his life forever, Elli, a werewolf girl who was the daughter of the leader of the pack. Elli constantly visited Sol while he was in recovery and the two began to grow closer each day, it wasn't until Sol fully recovered that Elli took him on a picnic to celebrate, however it did not go well. While Elli was preparing the food a bear had come across the food and attack her, Sol rushed in, that small flicker of darkness became a tiny flame from the fear of possibly losing his new friend, to save her from death and get her to safety, when they returned to the pack he swore he would keep her safe, and not just her but also the pack that took him in, his new family. At the age of 13 Sol joined the rank of warriors that fought for the pack in order to become stronger to protect those who he cared for, the training was grueling but he managed to practice with the sword and learn remedial healing techiques and other basics of combat, during a training session Sol sensed the darkness that was slowly growing inside him.

Wondering how it came to be inside him he went to ask the pack's elders who knew the most about magic and folklore. They elders were shocked that Sol had darkness within himself, they told him the reason he had the darkness inside was because he was a direct decedent of a werewolf that had gained dark powers and used them to protect his kin in an ancient war. Sol didn't quite understand but accepted his darkness, he underwent special training, which taught him control of his darkness as well using it for attacks, from the elders to control and bend the darkness to his will, keeping it all a secret from the rest of the pack.

He fought in a few battles but in a string of luck he finally found him, his brother Galleon, the two fought until Sol cornered him, Galleon hating Sol for letting him be kidnap and the one who caused their parents death asked Sol the end his life. Sol refused and asked his brother to live with him and the pack, it took a few flinging of fists and words put Galleon finally accepted his brother's offer and found a new place for himself alongside Sol.

When the Heartless and Nobodies attacked their world Sol, Galleon, and Elli fought to protect their loved ones but it was useless, as a final act of self-defense, the pacts strongest magic users, including Galleon, created a barrier around their territory to protect themselves form the darkness and separated themselves from their world, Sol however, wasn't so lucky. He was too far away from the barrier when he reached it he couldn't get through and he knew why, the darkness within himself was being rejected by the barrier, soon he was caught in the darkness, as he plunged into the depths of darkness Sol used his darkness to mask himself and his heart for safety, he began floating towards a world covered in twilight and wound up in Twilight Town, completely separated from his pack.

Role Playing Sample: Sol walked through the forest area of Twilight Town, due to the fact he could not walk around in public, it would be strange to see a teenager with wolf ears and a tail walking around a populated area as big as the town. The only places where he could venture around were the forest, the old mansion, and the underground tunnels, although he did manage to hid his wolf features by wearing his hood and wrapping his tail around his waist to wear it as a belt when he went out in public to do small jobs for munny,buy supplies, or even compete in Struggle matches when boredom began to sink in.

"Makes you wonder," he began speaking to himself as he leaned against a tree, "Why someone who can travel to different worlds doesn't go looking for his own homeworld."

It was true, ever since he came to Twilight Town he hasn't left yet, he tried to but he didn't have a clue what he would do if he left, he had no idea where everyone he knew was, besides, this new world has started to grow on him, the all day sunset was taking some time getting used to.

"Oh well," he simply shrugged his shoulders, "This place seems really nice anyway." As he started to close his eyes to get lost in his own thoughts something white appeared in the corner of his eye, a Dusk.

"You guys just love to bug people don't you." Sol stood straight up and faced the Nobody which seemed to notice him and begun slithering towards him, as it got close enough to its prey it lunged at Sol who simply raised his hand in front of him and smirked, "Impulse Wave." a small shockwave fired from his hand and sent the Nobody flying back a few feet away from him. "Now for the finishing move!" Sol yelled out as he pulled Devil White out the pit of darkness and in one quick swing, sliced the creature in two and watch it disappear. He sent his black sword back to the depths of darkness and picked up some munny that the Dusk left behind.

"Heh...maybe I'll go buy some of that ice cream everybody here keeps talking about, I could go for something sweet today."

With a smile on his face and after putting the munny in his pocket he put his hood on and wrapped his tail around his waist and headed for the hole in the wall the lead to town, the thoughts of having something sweet to snack on later today completely filled his head as he walked towards the shop that sold the "famous" ice cream that caught his attention as well as his appetite. The earlier conversation he had with himself was nothing but a distant memory now, something he hoped that didn't come back later today as he paid for his ice cream and took a bite out of it.

[Ellie who has 0%]

Okie dokie....

1.) You need to space out your history and rp sample. Who would really want to read a huge block? Remember paragraphs are your best friends. Once you space it off, we can continue with more reviews and what not because a character and people in general are bi-products of their enviroment and history.

2.) Off the bat remove Dark Corridors and Pocket Void.

[lunardevian]

Okay edited and I fixed up the history so he didn't make a Dark Corridor. Did I put spaces in the right spots? Just asking is all.

Edits made as of April 27
-Change Deka and Hara to their names I meant to give them, Devil White and Angel Black, also classified them under Gunblades for proper classification.

-Changed Inner Darkness to Dark Resonance.
-Modified his apperance a little and a few powers.
-Dark Bullet is the only ammunition Sol has.
-I also took off the post lengths of his two transformations since he can swicth in and out of them, as stated in the text.

Hope these were okay.

[Ellie who has 0%]

- No gunblades; we have a no gunblade policy for OC's.
- Note that in his werewolf and wolf forms he cannot use his weapons. He's an animal at this point and relies on typical natural animal weaponry such as: claws, fangs, wtc. With that in mind you should chart abilities that he can do in particular forms for organization purposes. Describe each form attributes on its own.

- Limit needs to be changed, because he won't be using weaponry in his werewolf form.

- Shadow Streak- quite random for normal tatoos..to eject darkness.

History;;
- A child born...with heart filled with darkness. Really? Sorry that just doesn't sound plausible how you have it. Even so, I doubt a childishness can hold back...a mass of darkness.

- Also even a 6 yr old...killing off other weres...is a stretch. With that you're making your character more powerful then he truly is. Also with the immense darkness in his heart in question, this is unplausible and unrealistic.

- Rp Sample Helpful Tip: *Dialouge either is at the beginning and/or end of a narrative paragraph, or it have it's OWN paragraph

- 5 days to edit

[lunardevian]

Alrighty all edits made. I made his weapons into simple longswords and removed any firearm abilitlies, sections, etc. and replaced them with new abilites if that's alright. For the history, he only had a small amount off darkness, don't know if that's alright, and it grew overtime, I also added an extra paragraph for said darkness. On a side note, thanks for telling me he seemed too powerful, that was something I was trying to avoid while creating him.

Oh, and if I want to add a link to a song I would want to use as a theme and/or battle theme what code do I use?

[Ellie who has 0%]

better better better accepted;;

[lunardevian]

Thanks, well I know what to do so I can finish the rest.