In a cataclysm known as the Nightfall, the worlds were almost completely destroyed by a harrowing surge of darkness.
In the shadows of the ensuing chaos a new group has taken shape. Led by an Aegyl named Kalos, the 11th Hour touts an esoteric knowledge of how to combat the darkness and restore the worlds. They might be the worlds’ best chance at survival; but nobody really knows enough about them to confirm or deny their claims.
On the brink of collapse, the universe holds its breath in anticipation. Of restoration? Of destruction? It is up to individuals like yourself to decide.
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Post by Ellie who has 0% on May 24, 2011 20:59:48 GMT -4
Alrighty
Tips: Double Space the History and the RP Sample; it will make it easier to read. Write in Complete Sentences; that means use capitalization, complete thought, and punctuation.
I'm Ellie and I shall be assisting you with your profile
Powers; 1.) Twilight is not an element. It's more of a term in regards to KH of one using darkness for good purposes...nothing more or less, so remove it.
3.) Dual wielding - What are these weapons? You don't have them listed in your weaponry inventory, so remove them.
4.) Magick- You should detail how his basic magick skill 'functions'. Fire is it a fireball or what? etc.
5.) Limit Attack: This needs a major edit. Your character cannot have access to the Dark Realm, so he can't send people through them, nor is the realm of light (thus far in the KH canon) and actual different dimension like the Realm of Darkness. Technically the worlds are in the Realm of Light. And NO you cannot have a limit that auto-kills your opponent. I don't even think your 14 yr old charrie is strong enough to pull that off.
6.) Dark Realm Twilight Blade - If he doesn't have it remove it.
7.) Space between the sentences in your Personality.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on May 25, 2011 11:42:18 GMT -4
No i didn't read the history...look at it. I don't LIKE reading blocks of type, and I refuse to; also this isn't the first time where a staff 'requested' on to space out properly for easy reading. So if you want me to read the rest of your profile make sure the edits are done.
