In a cataclysm known as the Nightfall, the worlds were almost completely destroyed by a harrowing surge of darkness.
In the shadows of the ensuing chaos a new group has taken shape. Led by an Aegyl named Kalos, the 11th Hour touts an esoteric knowledge of how to combat the darkness and restore the worlds. They might be the worlds’ best chance at survival; but nobody really knows enough about them to confirm or deny their claims.
On the brink of collapse, the universe holds its breath in anticipation. Of restoration? Of destruction? It is up to individuals like yourself to decide.
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Hiya, I'm Zephiris, and I'll be reviewing your profile. ^^
To start off, nearly every single piece of Smoke's equipment, combined with his other spells, is much, much too powerful. Please tone them down heavily or remove a few. However, with his history, I can let be some of his own abilities that would be typically considered advanced for a man of his age.
A few major edits, unfortunately, are also required in the history. There are multiple issues on canon matters. One of these include the mention of Traverse Town protection and law systems, as there are no canonical evidence of there being any of the things you mentioned. Perhaps some 'local residents' would serve as an alternative to 'Town guards'. The segment on the world's government needs to me removed. In fact, to keep Guy's history intact, I'd to suggest that you create an original world for him to hail from, and have the Vanguard be an association from there. (Perhaps one that is slowly falling to darkness, and needs the group to keep both Heartless and corrupted humans at bay.)
On that note, all mention of gummi ships and interworld travel needs to be removed. Gummi ships are extremely rare and, for the most part, canon. They originated from King Mickey, and the technology has advanced with Ansem the Wise and Xehanort. The knowledge is now primarily kept by both the manufacturers at Disney Castle and by characters like Cid or Geppetto. The possession of gummi ships by this non-canon group cannot work in this case, my apologies. Very few OCs have them, and even those with reason. I'd suggest keeping the Vanguard a world-bound association, yet another reason why creating an Original World is almost inevitable if you wish to keep many components of Smoke's history.
And, for future reference, please keep RP posts relatively more in line with the worlds in which they take place. This depiction of Radiant Garden is a tad off. Even if it isn't as bright as it used to be, I doubt characters such as those in the RGRUC would miss such a dark, violent bar rising in a world in which very few complete buildings have yet been forged, and would allow their world to sink so low so early in its reconstruction.
