Niko Thaleon

[nikothaleon]

Name: Niko Thaleon


Nickname:Niko


Age: 18


Gender: male


Species:Human


Position: Neutral. He is just in it for his sister.


Powers: none, he fights with his Weapon.


Weapon: The Heartbreaker sword


Picture:



Appearance:

His hair is gray and spiked like soras. He wears a torn white shirt under a leather vest. his pants are baggy and dark brown. His boots a large but they have little weight to them making it easy for him to move. he wears his sword on his back. when he isn't fighting he wears a bluish gray cloak so people don't see him as a pirate. his face is soft and vacant of the usual pirate stubble. his eyes are a strange shade of red making him seem mysterious. his baggy cloths make him seem less muscles then he actually has, which gives him an advantage when his enemies take him for granted


Personality:He is quite, and mysterious. once he gets to no someone he is not as quite though, in fact he usually talks to much. He is almost always happy, until he is alone, or someone brings up his sister. When someone starts to talk about his sister in a bad way he gets extremely mad, once he went on a rampage because of it. he does unexpected things at unexpected times. sometimes he gets off track but he usually finds his way back to what he was supposed to be doing. He is smarter then he lets on, which he uses to his advantage. The whole time he is talking to someone he is really trying to find the perfect way to defeat them or escape from capture. He is also a ladies man who never seems to get it when women don't like him. He especially love women who are strong and willful. No matter how strange his approach to fighting may be he is constantly thinking of one thing, getting his sister back from the nobodies and organization 13.



Original World: The Caribbean
Current World: Twilight Town


History:He was born the son of a pirate, Trained for sword fighting and adventure. When the Nobodies appeared in The Caribbean him and his father worked together to try and stop them, but they failed, The nobodies killed his father and left him to wounded to stop them from killing his mother and taking his sister. when he awoke his heart was Ripped apart by seeing his parents bodies dead on the ground he then created a sword which he called the Heartbreaker.


Role Playing Sample: Nikos eyes snapped open, he looked around the room, searching for some sign of life. He walked out onto the deck of the ship and saw his fathers crew, all defeated by the nobodies.

Niko staggered to the Captains quarters, eager to find his father and set sail to find the nobodies. Nothing could have prepared him for what he saw when he opened the doors.

His father lying in a pole of blood, his mother dead in her bed, as if she had been killed in her sleep, and his sister was nowhere to be found. Niko fell to his knees and gripped his heart, he started crying.

For weeks he plotted his revenge. Niko created a sword and Hijacked a gummi ship. He then Flew between the worlds, searching for his sister. He is now in twilight town searching for information on the nobodies.
Questions/Comments/Suggestions?

[nikothaleon]

(I finished it)

[Zephiris]

Please reread the profile template for word requirements. Also, we cannot accept his weapon's resemblance to a keyblade.

Seven days to edit.

[nikothaleon]

OK I fixed it so his sword didn't look like a keyblade (I didn't know if you would allow it or not so I decided to just try)

Also, I have been searching up and down the site and I can't find anything for word requirements.

[Zephiris]

The only stickied post in this board has the character profile form, which you followed, yes? It also mentions word requirements for each section.

[nikothaleon]

OK I found what you meant and fixed it.

[Zephiris]

Sorry, actually, you haven't fixed it. ;] The word requirements, as stated on that form, are:

100 Appearance
175 Personality
500 History
500 RP Sample

[nikothaleon]

oh

[Ellie who has 0%]

Rejected for not editting timely. When in doubt, repost.