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Powers: Smoke bomb- Netti throws a simple smoke bomb that lasts for two turns but can be used in stacks each time increasing th effect by 2 turns. The cloud extends to about a quarter of a basketball court. He has four of them.
Electro marble-When used it will cause a powerful shock to run through whoever it hits. The shock can be compared to a thunder spell can be used in multiples up to three to make thundara/ thundaga. He has pouch full of them which is too say 20 of them.
Al Bhed potion- A secret Remedy known to Al Bhed that heals him and cures anything like silence or poison. Has four of them on him
Overdrive(can only be used when very hurt) (If he has the items)He straps together an electro marble and a smoke bomb and while it's in mid-air he throws another marble and shoots a bullet at it causin smoke electric shocks. He can only use this once in a topic.
Weapon: Netti uses a simple Machina Rifle as seen in the game. It shoots a single shot at a time with fastish reload time.
Picture: N/A
Appearance: Netti is a medium man roughly 5' 4". He shares many similar traits that most Al Bhed have including blond hair and green eyes with swirled pupils. Netti's usual attire consists of baggy tan pants. He wears regular sized brown boots. He wears a baggy tan shirt that's slightly cut in the middle down to his mid-chest. He has a pair of goggles that he wears from time to time. He also wears a pair of brown gloves with a thin O that is yellow on the top side. His hair is cut down to the top of his ears. He has a single straight scar on his chest from a fight.
Personality: Netti's personality is very straight forward most of the time. He is very friendly and talkative and enjoys making Friends. It is very hard to anger Netti but if you do well he is kind of a push over. His fighting skills are horrible but he mostly tries to stay at a ranged distance to shoot his enemies. But all i all he is friendly and relaxed. Netti can speak both Al Bhed and can speak English well enough sometimes getting things wrong with the English language. Even though Netti can speak the English language fairly well at times he my respond to a question in Al Bhed. When Netti has no one to talk to he enjoys tinkering with different mechanical items or just doing some target practice with his rifle.He hates and I mean hates cold weather and if the weather is cold you will most likely find Netti at home staying warm. Even though he stinks at fighting he still does enjoy shooting his gun and feels it as more of a hobby.
Original World: Spira Current World: Twilight Town
History:Pre FFX- Netti was born under Sal Tusone and Greta Folly. His parents were kind to him and taught him about the world and about the Al Bhed haters.Even though his parents knew of all the Al Bhed haters they still brought him to many places like Kilika were Netti learned how to speak English. Though when Netti was twelve his parents died to a few fiends. This made Netti very sad but he still kept his friendly personalty keeping the sadness hidden inside of him. He still continued on and one down while he was just wandering around Home he came across a Machina Rifle. He gladly picked it up but unfortunately it wasn't his and he got smacked ten times over for trying to "steal" the rifle. Later on though the man who smacked him felt sorry for the boy and gave him the the rifle as a way of saying sorry. He found a liking to firing the gun and soon found it like a fun hobby to practice shooting it. Over time the sadness of his parents death seeped away from inside of him which made him feel much better but he would still never forget them.
FFX- Netti mostly stayed at Home during most of the events in Final Fantasy ten until the Guado attacked Home of course. When the Guado attacked he tried to help defend but since he was only sixteen at the time things didn't work out well for him so he retreated to Cid's airship. After the whole Evrae incident Nettie left the air ship at Kilika. From there he still had to be careful because there were still many Al Bhed haters about. He spent this time trying to to become a fighter by fighting the fiends in Kilika's woods. It wasn't until after Sin's defeat that he snuck on board a ship to Luca and found himself on the mainland of Spira.
FFX-2- During all the events Netti mostly kept to himself keeping a nomads life. He did go to Macalania once during this time which he hated it was here he really learned to hat the cold weather. After words he went from place to place avoiding any Al Bhed haters. One time during this period he was in Luca again were he got into a fight with one of the people there. He lost and his opponent cut him at the chest causing a scar there.
After FF times- When Darkness consumed Spira Netti found himself in a large town. Luckily for him he knew English so it didn't take him long to learn that this tow was in fact Twilight Town. In this new town he found himself a new home which was very plain. He explored most of the town so he knew exactly what new type of world he was on.
Present- Netti has mostly been wandering about Twilight Town. He is still practices his gun shooting abilities and just plainly trying to have a good time.
Role Playing Sample: See Renzo or Oogie Boogie.
Questions/Comments/Suggestions? N/A
Jul 11, 2011 3:59:51 GMT -4
Last Edit: Sept 21, 2011 20:30:22 GMT -4 by Zephiris
Hi, Coolkid! I'll be looking at Netti today. There are a few concerns, unfortunately.
Smoke bombs, Electro Marble, Armor Break and Gun Barrage all need to be reworked. I'll explain why below.
Smoke bomb seems like a rather arbitrary ability that's in flux. Why does it increase in effectiveness when there are more people? In order to balance this, you need to define how large the smoke cloud gets and make the duration consistent.
Electro marble has no detailed description of its effects on other individuals. "Powerful" how? If the average person was shocked by it, what would happen as a result?
Armor Break can't apply to everything. Some types of characters are more or less resistant to bullets in general - Behemoths or Berserkers come to mind. I doubt one shot from a simple rifle could break any defense, so please add some limitations to this. Heck, it doesn't even seem like it could be a special ability - if I'm holding a .45 magnum in my hand and I yell 'armor break' before I shoot an aluminum soda can, it doesn't change the fact that I just blew up a soda can. What triggers this ability, exactly?
Gun Barrage needs a duration and more details. I also doubt he could unload more than three or four bullets in the space of a single post given that he's using a rifle along the lines of a bolt-action one.
Try working these issues out, please. Seven days to edit.
for the smoke bombs I was meaning like if there are two people someone else posts I post someone else posts/ smoke is now gone. If there are more people like ley's say three then it would be someone 1 post/ someone 2 post/ I post/someone 1 post/ someone 2 post/ smoke is now gone. So I wasn't trying to make it more powerful just trying to say if there were more people it would last like that instead of Someone 1 post/ someone 2 post/ I post/ smoke gone.
Well I guess the armor break would more or less be like a bullet made more powerful through a mechanism. (I put it as an ability because it was so in the game, I'll edit it once I think of it)
The other parts though I'll edit and i'll post once the edits are done.
Heya Coolkid. Mousey here and I will be taking over this profile.
Let’s begin~
Powers: I still feel your powers need to be revised. Now, I’ve played FFX so I know where you are coming from with these powers, only one problem: these aren’t necessarily powers, but items. As such, changes need to be made to reflect this.
First things first, as they are items I am fairly certain Netti is not carrying an endless supply of them into battle… That’d be kinda silly. I would like to see a limit put on the number of each item Netti can carry into each battle, for example Smoke Bombs are fairly hand-sized, like grenades, and I can’t see Netti carrying more than six at a time into battle. Electro Marbles, as the name suggests, I would assume would be marble sized; as such, I can see Netti carrying a bag of these, containing about 30 or so marbles with him into battle. Al Bhed Potions would go along the same line as Smoke Bombs, larger than marbles, so I don’t see him carrying more than six. I’d like to see a limit on the number of each item he can carry into battle – and try to make them reasonable. And since they are items, they don’t need a cool-down; instead he can’t use them anymore once he runs out.
Now for each items effect, starting with the Smoke Bombs… Instead of having the Smoke Bomb’s effect last for so amount of turn for this many people, and the Smoke Bomb’s effect last for this many people more, I would like to see the duration kept constant and the area constant. In fact, you could very well have the effect of the Smoke Bomb stack by using multiple Smoke Bombs: for example, using one Smoke Bomb will create a smoke screen that will last two turns, but using two will make the effect last four. Sure, it uses his supply faster, but creates a singular, longer lasting effect.
As for the Electro Marbles… Let’s first establish what sort of power they can generate. I would think using one Electro Marble would cause the effects of a basic Tunder spell. Like with the Bombs, using multiple Marbles at once could boost this effect: two Thundara, and three Thundaga. Again, he will be going through his Marbles faster, but it balances out how many times he can use powerful skills and will force him to think strategically.
AL Bhed Potion… Cures him of status effects. Sounds perfectly fine, but remember he can only carry so many on him into battle.
Finally his Overdrive… it does not make much sense. So he fires his gun, tosses a Marble and a Bomb at the foe? Does not sound too different from what he regularly does. Spice it up! Maybe have him throw up the Bomb and Marble and then shoot them while they are over the enemy, creating a smoke veil that covers them while lightning rains down from above! Make it flashy! Also, I would like to see a cool-down for this one, since it’s a very special ability that can only be used under special circumstances.
History: I will need to review this with the staff since it ties into the worlds of Final Fantasy, though since you are not a cannon from those games, and don’t include much of the FFX’s plot in your history I’m sure it will work out. Despite a few grammatical hiccups, history looks fine.
Everything else checks out in the profile. Fix up what I detailed, and once that is done I will converse with the staff regarding your history.
Five days to edit, and please color all edits purple so I can see what has been changed.
After your third staff switch, I'll go ahead an accept Netti. Apologies for such a delay. xD
As far as I can see your FFX history checks out fine, though I never finished the game myself. If a problem arises I can just PM for you to edit it. ;]
