Dagga

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Name:Dagga


Nickname:The Red Assassin


Age:In elf years.....30039 years old......In appearance 20


Gender:Male


Species:Elf


Position:Neutral


Powers:Normal elf powers(Run very fast, with high stamina, better hearing and eyesight than humans.) Great at magic, which means he can use ALMOST any type of magic. He can also make weapons(provided the right material) and normally Doesn't sell them.


Weapon:Dagga uses a weapon that is a staff with a kind of jagged edge on it, with a wicked looking Spike on the top. It has a wooden Main part, with some gold on it, Lots of golden designs sticking off of it, and the tip is red, and metal(steel) colored.


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Appearance:Dagga is tall and skinny. He wears a red mask with tufts of hair sticking out. ( The mask looks just like the one that DIZ wears in Kingdom Hearts 2) Dagga wears ripped clothing that is black. The rips in his clothing show that he has fought some dangerous battles, and the suit which was supposed to be long sleeved is ripped near the elbow on one sleeve and ripped by the shoulder on the other arm. This means that his skin is showing all the way down his arms. He is white. Dagga wears no shoes and has blue eyes. The little bit of hair that sticks out is blond, and no one knows what his face looks like because he NEVER takes his mask off.(Not even for hair cuts)Over his right eye he wears an eye patch. No one knows what his eye underneath looks like, but he assures people it's not pretty. Dagga has many scars and tattoos. He has an X on his neck, because he was caught making an illegal weapon. He also has many gashes that have turned to scars up and down his arms.


Personality:Dagga is a very nice elf(unless he wants to kill you) Dagga likes any weapons that look cool or strong. Dagga hates someone who looks stronger than him, and is afraid of people that ARE stronger than him. Dagga's strength is Magic, and swordsmanship, his weaknesses are defense and mental stability. One of Dagga's few secrets is that his face is fine, and that he doesn't really need an eye patch. He just thinks it looks cool. One of Dagga's talents is that in dangerous situations he can think fast and get himself out of the situation. An example of this is that if he were pinned to the ground with nothing to do, he'd send some kind of magic right in the other guy's face. Dagga finds anything that is shiny interesting and absolutely loves to polish his sword so that it looks shinier than a pearl. All that you really have to do to tick off Dagga is to mention his long-lost parents, or tell him about something he does wrong. He hates to hear negative things about himself.



Original World:Destiny Islands
Current World:Traverse town(Third District)


History:Before Dagga turned 2000 he didn't record anything and very little is known about his life before he turned 2000. all that we know is that he lived a peaceful life with both of his parents. When he turned 2019, though he became an orphan because his parents had recently been killed in a battle. When Dagga turned 2098, he decided he needed to take his anger out on something and became an assassin killing people for money. When Dagga was 3020 he heard about three kids that had lived on these cursed islands that he couldn't get off of. He heard that they built a raft and disappeared in the middle of the night. Is that right? Dagga thought when he heard about it. The three famous key blade wielders escaped this very island that I'm on now! When he heard this he followed in their footsteps and landed on none other than Traverse Town. He decided that this was where he wanted to settle down for a little while. By the time he completed this he was 3079, and decided that he needed to stop being an assassin and to get a real life making weapons, or managing a shop. Then it hit him. If he worked hard maybe he too could get his very own key blade! He decided to work hard and prove himself worthy. Then, a very bad idea came to him...He would make his very own key blade until he was given one. Then in the middle of making it someone caught him and turned him in. The "Key blade"(If you could even call it a Key blade) was taken away, and a few days later, they put an X on his neck and discovered that a hand made key blade had no power. You had to earn it. So he decided to go and earn himself a key. First he would improve the little bit of Magic that he had learned on Destiny Islands and in Traverse Town. When I turn 4000 I'll be the best magician in the world he thought. Since I'm an elf, I can probably learn spells faster than any human in these worlds he thought. Then he turned 19980 and the reality hit him. He really needed to find an instructor. He needed to leave this world he thought He needed to find someone as good as the great magician Yensid. He never did make it anywhere. Just at the moment he was all packed he found a small spell book containing spells that he had never even heard of. Some of them where Magnet, Magnera, Magnega, Slow, Stop, and many other complicated spells. He took until he was 20000, and then decided that he knew every spell in the book. When Dagga turned 20198, he found another book with all the most advanced spells. Firaga, Blizzaga, Thundaga, Curaga, and all the other spells that were -aga. Then he boarded the Gummi ship to a new world. He arrived in Wonderland. What to do here he wondered. Oh! I need to find more spells to learn, so that one day I might wield a key blade. While in Wonderland he didn't find any new spells, but he did practice the spells that he found in the spell book. He mastered Firaga and Curaga. For the next couple hundred years he traveled back and forth from Wonderland, to Traverse Town helping people out, and sometimes he took on an assassination job to let his steam out. Then Dagga turned 30000. He lost his boots. He was wondering through Wonderland, and something was sucking him in like Quick Sand! He pulled his feet out of his boots and ran for his life. He decided not to ever buy new shoes again. He would just wander around in his bare feet. Then as he mumbled Firaga to kill the heartless that had just appeared in front of him, he realized that he hadn't talked to anyone in a conversation since his parents died. So he set off in search of a new friend in a new land, but first he needed to go home. By the time he was ready to leave, he was 30039 years old and had no friends. He left Traverse Town for a new land to find his first friend in over 3000 years....

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I don't know how to role play, and that is why the role playing sample is blank. I think that it would be the best choice to go to the Role Playing Academy, but I really don't know. Whatever you decide is probably the best thing to do. Can I have an Elf? I want to insert a picture when I get my scanner to work, is there a way to insert it after it gets approved.(IF it gets approved.)

[Ellie who has 0%]

Okay, I will have to bluntly say that this profile is flawed in many ways.

1.) You have an extra old elf for no apparent reason (and 'just because it's cool is not a good reason) just to say you can't even record his life from birth to now.

2.) The elf is from a place where...there aren't any native elves, Destiny Island.

3.) His historical timeline is out of whack. Just think about it, he's 30039 years old NOW. 3020 he learned that Sora, Kairi, and Riku (which is knew of them as keyblade wielders) got off the island and decided to follow in their footsteps (which was only according to this site...just 3 years ago.)

Out of curiosity, have you played the KH games? I'm not trying to be pestering or whatever, but EVERYONE who played the games should know that
a.) Destiny Island was destroyed
b.) The three weren't even aware that they could wield keyblades; hell Sora got that surprise notice during the storm that led to the world destruction.
c.) They didn't 'left' the island...voluntary; they were more likely forced out when the world went BOOM, soo he couldn't follow in their footsteps since EVERYONE would've poofed elsewhere too.

So I advice you too look at our new profile outline; the thread have more guidelines to help you. I also advice you to go on KH wikia and get acquainted with Kingdom Hearts and look at other accepted profiles. You can easily find mine by clicking either Dark or Light Chronicles in my signature.

Also other tips

1.) list your charrie powers, give them details and drawbacks
2.) Be mindful of the KH timeline and be realistic and not idealistic. (Don't throw every cool thing together without giving it a reason and purpose other than to be cool.)
3.) Don't even use canons in your history with their permission; also Dagga wouldn't know anything about Yen Sid.