Hosaki Gin (New character)

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Name: Hosaki Gin

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Position: Neutral, Only helps when he thinks is necessarily needed.

Powers/Abilities/Techniques/Skills:
Water walk/run: Has the ability to walk on or run on water as if he was walking/running normally.
Wall walk/run: Able to walk/run upon walls as if he can normally walk on the ground.
Water Clones: Has the ability to create clones made of water. Only able to work when near water.

Weapon/Items:He carries Only Three weapons on him His Sword, Giant Shrunken, and a Button activated Metal Bo Staff.

Sword: A standard Ninja-to that's a 2 1/2 foot blade with a 1 foot long handle. Used for slashing, stabbing and Blocking opponents attacks. The Ninja-to Is in its case Worn on his back. Witch Slants Diagonally to his right side where he can reach it

Giant Shrunken: A Shrunken that is five to ten size its normal size. It has four Curved Blades that rotate while being thrown. It also has a boomerang like effect. Also worn on his Back Tied to him.

Bo Staff: Made of medal It first looks like a six Inch handheld Item. When Activated it becomes a 6 foot staff that can be used in combat. The button also retracts it to its small size. Can Fit in any pocket.


Appearance: He has white spiky hair. He has Blue eyes, but the inside retinas are Snow whit inside. He has a tattoo of White Tiger with claws On fire and the color is Blue. Witch can be found on his right Shoulder. He has small lips and a medium size nose He wears A regular White T-shirt That is covered by a black zip-up vest.
He wears Blue Camouflage Pants that are military issued. He wears Ninja Boots worn in the traditional style. He also wears Black finger less gloves. He has no Fat on his body, completely made o muscle. Complete with an eight pack of abs. He stands at about 5 feet, nine inches tall. Weights about 225 lbs. On Special occasions He wears A Blue Kimono With A White tiger on the back. Same color pants. And a "Its my birthday" Bandanna on his forehead.

Personality: He is a very quiet and collective kind of guy. He likes to keep his thoughts to himself. He only Speaks unless spoken to or has something to say. He likes be the first to fight, and can sometimes try to give orders in battle. He however is a virgin so talking to women makes him feel uncomfortable cause he really doesn't know how to speak to them. If a girl/woman is in a awkward position he will nosebleeds! (Classic amine). He is motivated By his first teacher to become a helping person to those who cant help themselves.
He fears that one day eventually the darkness will take control of all the worlds and feels he must travel all of the worlds to try to prevent that from happening. He desires to Have his own land he can call home. To build his own ninja clan for his cause and to Expand that clan to all world to keep the peace. He loves to Play card games, and once in a while gamble.
In a group He is the first to battle. He can cooperate with people when it counts. He Can and will defend other people in battle. He basically is the balance of offense/defense/ and support to any team that is interested. In Situations where heartless and nobodies show up, As a single person he fights off all of them, and searches for fellow allies once enemies are defeated. If he is with a group he evaluates the situation and attacks the strongest of the heartless/nobodies. Making the battle easier to win for the whole group. When combat is over he makes sure no one was injured or missing. He never leaves a friend behind.

Original World: Radiant Garden

Current World: Radiant Garden

History: He was born At the Radiant Garden By His parents Hosaki Jake and Isabel Mary. He was raised by them during the ten years of BBS. When he was 7 His parents took him to Traverse Town and left him to fend for himself fearing that he was a problem child and they could not take care of him anymore due to financial troubles.
He worked at the hotel as a bus boy till he could afford to buy a Ticket to ride on a ship Back to Radiant Garden. When he got there he went to seek someone who was willing to take him in. He went everywhere that he knew. Then he saw A Martial arts building, along his way though the area. He stepped in and saw a man in a black Martial arts outfit. He challenged the old man in a test to prove his worth. He reluctantly Accepted Gin challenge and the two squared off. At days end he proved his worth to the old man and took him under his wing.
It Took 5 years worth of training (starting of KH2) He was able to master all of the skills he was taught and was given his first mission as a ninja to eliminate all the heartless in the town square. Feeling the excitement of battle he rushed into battle. The old man stopped Gin and gave him his weapons that he had before. Now that he has retired he no longer needs them. Their relationship was rocky first time they met but became master and pupil.
Finally after getting ready he went after the heartless. Seeing so many was a surprise. seeing them in such huge numbers made him scared. That changed when he heard a girl scream for help. Gin rushed in their destroying all of the heartless. He felt the adrenalin. Being thanked for helping her he was kissed on the cheek and made his nosebleed for the first time.
He soon realized how important helping people became. He then became his own independent ninja for hire. Soon after he took over the Martial arts building when His master died in his sleep. He turned it into his headquarters for hire. He buried His master in his own back yard as his Master wanted in his will. From that point forward he continues to increase his skill and help out whenever he can for the residence of the Radiant garden. Though he still wants to travel to all the worlds and continue his work.


Role Playing Sample: Gin wakes up from having a nightmare of his family leaving him. Sweat was dripping from his forehead and breathing heavily he couldn't help but to feel anger and sorrow for his own pain. "Ugh what a dream. Still I cant believe they did that to me" He said to himself. He gets out of bed and walks to the kitchen to look for something to eat.
He looks in the refrigerator first and to find only milk and lemonade inside. Then he checks the cabinets inside and find instant soup. "Well...Nothing beats having late night soup" He said to himself again. Taking the time to cook his noodles he reflected on his dream. He couldn't get it out of his head. As he sits down after cooking his meal he looked out the window. He notices heartless are pooping up and starting to attack Innocent people.
He couldn't help but to spit his food out all over his table Realizing the situation he quickly rushes to get ready for battle. "Damn-it you would think they couldn't come at a horrible time! Guess its time for work" He thought to himself. He was finally dressed And leaped out the window and into battle. He Draws his sword from his back and attack one of the heartless. By destroying that one heartless got their attention and went after Gin. He Stand there defensively, waiting for them to come closer.
"Come on who's next" he screams. The heartless jumps in the air hoping to take him down. He finally realizes his situation and cant help but to enjoy. One heartless attacked him from behind pinning him to the ground as the rest jumps all over him. They took Him down and was tearing him apart Eventually becoming a heartless, the one thing he hated to be. "Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" Gin screams. As he wakes up in his bed again. "Just another dream holy...." He said to himself as he lays back on his bed. Putting his head on a comfy pillow. "Just another horrible dream" he thought and went to bed again.

[Zephiris]

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