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Name (First/last):
Alice Valentino
Nickname:
Valentino or "Scraps" (her dad called her Scraps due to her trying to build small items from the scrap metal in his workshop.)
Age:
Twenty
Gender:
Female
Species:
Human
Position:
chaotic good (Doesn't like to follow society but still cares for others.)
Powers/Abilities/Techniques/Skills:
Craftsmanship/mechanics- gifted Being a gifted mechanic one of the best in her world. She is able to build things such as motorcycles and computer equipment. Simple things (such as repairing things) she can do from her own knowledge while larger/more complexed items needs a blue-print created by herself or she needs to find one. Also she needs the materials and larger equipment for the complexed items. She has made of number of inventions to her own design.
Her skills in computers is also rather high, mainly as she has one of the first laptops made. She has also customised it with new updates and technology.
Fighting skills- below averageHer fighting skills is very poor. She has never needed to fight until recently. Even then she would much rather stay in the workshop and make objects to aid others than fight. However; she has only began to teach herself how to fight. Her strength is high as she has to lift heavy objects but her fighting technique... Could do with improvement.
intelligence- above average. To be more specific she is smarter than almost all in the topic of mechanics. She enjoys riddles and brain teasers so they have helped her in her mind.
Limitations and Drawbacks
She lacks experience from fighting and therefore would do better if she built others objects to help others. To follow from that she is also pretty clumsy, with the tendency to walk into walls, doors and trip up, once even punched herself... Don't ask how.
When creating something new, (Like a new invention) it takes time. Thirty posts to be exact. This is as she needs to do sketches, create blueprints, make a prototype and long last, create the real thing. Lucky, updating items is easier (five posts). The cooldown for inventing/updating items is 30 posts.
Weapons/Items:
Weapons:
A pair of fingerless gloves with large spikes on the knuckles.
She would throw bolts and nuts that she carries around with her everywhere.
Items:
Mechanics belt professional- a belt that holds almost all small appliances such is, screw driver, both flat and star types. sandpaper, a pouch for nuts and bolts, an adjustable wrench, a second wrench slightly larger, safety pins, a hammer, metallic file, portable solder iron and solder as well as a mini flamethrower and a small oil carton, enough to get a bicycle working again .
Laptop v. 0.2- the laptop her dad made for her, it is neon yellow with a black thin line along the upper rim. It's programme has been updated twice in it's lifetime. It has 300 hours battery life and uploads all her blueprints on it, 500 GB of memory, a computer hacking system (low to medium security) and a built-in external camera. It also has everything else a laptop usually has.
Mobile Voice Communication or the MVC v. 0.4- it's a device that is portable, it's connected to her laptop wirelessly (Like the Internet) and she can access everything on her laptop when she is out and about, this also has a voice recording system for voice memos. She created this herself when she was 17.
Computer Hacking System- this system is made by herself. It can hack into any electronic item. She made it as she discovered that passwords was almost like the riddles and brain teasers she did, only she put it into her computer to work it out faster. It takes longer to break the codes depending on the security level. No security is instantly broken. Low security takes two posts. Medium security takes three posts. She hasn't made a high security hacking system yet. Each time it has to reset itself which always takes four posts.
IN DEVELOPMENT: RSSXI. This is a motorcycle. She is currently working on the prototype, when it is finished, she hopes it would go around 120mph, she would be able to charge her MVC while on the go and the motorcycle itself is to be used during battles for a quick escape, having enough room for two more people. It would be a quick escape as she would put in a tracking device where she puts in the co-ordinates of of where she is and the motorcycle would drive itself there, or at least that's her plan.
I will give new inventions and updates when needed.
Appearance:
Her figure is almost like a models, she was known to be beautiful even when having oil stains on her clothing and face. While saying she's like a model, you can see that she works out with toned figure. She stands tall at 5"9 and weighs 60kg.
Her hair is short, scruffy with parts of it completely spiked and other parts flicking outwards and plum coloured, her style is a flat longish pixie cut when she runs out of wax. Her eyes are emerald green. Her face seems almost pure with one very fainted freckle under her left eye. She doesn't bother wearing makeup as she usually gets it dirty.
Her clothing changes depending on if she is in the workshop or not. When she is not in the workshop, she would wear a jumpsuit. Neon green or yellow, usually with a couple of stains on them, she would also wear eye protection on her eyes. In addition she wears huge black and very thick gloves and boots to protect herself from small and sharp metal.
When out and about she would wear a pair of black work goggles around her neck along with a ruby cut emerald necklace. Wearing a neon yellow tank-top with a black hood attached to the top itself. Her trousers are three quarter lengths in black with her thick black work gloves hanging from her back pocket while her fighting gloves are in the front pocket and her work belt around her waist. Under her belt there is also neon pink braces Stay fastened to her trousers and are never placed upon her shoulders. Her boots are black with neon yellow soles and laces they go up just to meet the three quarter lengths.
Personality:
She likes to stand out from the crowed. She enjoys being an individual in her own right and will never let anyone change her mind. Although she holds great admiration for her father. Almost too much that some may think she's obsessed with him. She still often thinks about him which is made obvious by her grasping onto her emerald necklace.
Another large part of her personality is that she is very boastful, both of her fathers and her own works often bringing them into conversation herself or forcing them in. However she can also be seen as taking people for granted, mainly her brother.
She would also much rather be found in the workshop working on something than fighting someone. Mainly as she knows she has a gift for it. She has a little blog on her laptop about her ideas on creating new things.
Another thing to note is if she found of you. You would her world. And if anything happened to them she would fall apart again for a number of months.
Overall. She likes being herself. She lives what she does for a living but is rather selfish like if she makes something. It would be for herself and would most likely not make another for anyone unless they could pay for it. She does what she wants and doesn't really think of others opinions. Sometimes it might not look it as she is selfish but she does care for others. Not as much as some but she wouldn't just chose to hate someone.
Current world: Twilight Town
Original World: Twilight Town.
History: She was born late in the night in the family home. Her mother died during childbirth. Her father took care of her and her older brother. Her dad was a mechanic for Twilight Town and took care of building new trams and new lighting etc. He also built the stage for the struggle torments.
When she was five. She would have went to her dads workshop with her brother. She would grab a hammer and swing it around the place with her bother trying to get the hammer away from her before she hurt herself.
Her father was everything to her. She would have watched her dad build things from scratch. Then she would have mimicked doing the same thing to as him.
During her school years. She noticed how alike everyone was. The way they dressed, the way they looked, smiled, talked. Like they had no real personality. The next day she walked into school her hair was short, and her clothes were bright, making a fashion statement to be different from the world. The rest of her years at school was basic, she did well in class and in her spare time she would read riddles and do brain teasers. She often boasted about the great things her father had done fit the town, making her quite popular. However; her selfishness would make some people keep away from her.
By the time she was eleven, she finally got her dad allowing her to help in the workshop. He would also teach her how to do blueprints for new technology. Show how to repair basic technology and Alice would take the scraps and try and make something out of them. Her dad was so impressed by her commitment to this that he give her a unique gift. The laptop. He showed her how to us it as well as how to upload blueprints on it. He also had a blog on it which he updated, giving details about mechanics. She then began to boast about her great her dad was as well as how great she will be in the future.
Her life was very fulfilling until she turned seventeen when her father died unexpectedly. This hurt her so much that she was put on bed rest for three months. Her brother, took care of her as he made a promise to his mother to take care of his baby sister. She appreciated her bother taken care of her very much so. Her brother give her the dads emerald necklace, first given to their mother, she kept this as a motivation to continue the work of her late father.
Once she got better, she re-opened her fathers workshop getting her bother to help her out. This is when she invented the MVC so she could keep an eye on the business when she is out and about. She visits her fathers grave almost everyday. And when she does work it's to improve the trams, or making something new. She also shows the MVC to everyone saying this is the real big invention anyone has done fir a long time. Like since her father made the laptop.
She now spends her time either in the workshop creating or updating or repairing things or she is out and about talking about how amazing she is. However she still visits her dad once a week.
Role Playing Sample:
The sky was beaming red as people on the street began to head home from an over filled day of excitement. The only noise heard from the streets was coming from the old workshop. The wielder of the flames was creating sparks of all shapes and sizes as they his the ground. Alice was lying on her back under what looked like a mini version of the trams found throughout the town. Suddenly the noise stopped and Alice began to sit up. As she pushed herself up she hit her head off the edge of the small tram.
She rubbed her head giving a face of pain. "That's gonna leave a mark." she stated as she got up and headed towards a shiny tram plate used for the wheels to see the extent of the damage done to her crown. While looking she seen that her face was almost completely covered today in black, almost feeling like was off to burgle someones home. She took off the goggles to see that it wasn't only on her face. But in her hair with a large oil spill running down her back.
She didn't really mind getting dirty unlike a number of girls she new from her childhood. She looked outside to see if anyone was around. The street was diverted with only her fathers own handiwork lighting the streets. The world was silent. She hates silence, she began to hum a little song she invented herself when she felt alone. She wasn't the best at the whole sing thing but it's better than staying in complete silence. She has rarely ever been alone all her life with usually being with someone else.
"I guess... Today's over." she said to herself before jumping back into tune. And she began to pack up the essentials for her walk home. Her walk through the empty streets. She swiftly turned herself on the spot, then turned the other way, looking for her fathers necklace. She tends to put in one area, and her brother moves it to another. She caught a glimpse of it in the corner of her eye under the cleaning cloth that she used to clean the huge oil spill that nearly flooded the floor. She took her gloves off in fear that the necklace got dirty and pocketknife necklace. It was as clear and beautiful as it was the day she got it. She grapes onto it and held it close to her heart praying for better days to come.
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