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Post by foreverfugitive on Feb 23, 2012 22:33:52 GMT -4
Name: Moriko Miyano
Nickname: Mori (Or Mori-Mori)
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Position: Neutral
Powers/Abilities/Techniques/Skills:
1. Thunder Fist - The Ability to shoot electricity through a victim's body by using their fists. Can be at its full capability by being an impressive martial artist. Does require a recharge of about 1 to 2 posts. 2. Lightning Zen - Focusing an electric build-up in the chest before maneuvering it into the arms then hands to release a power shock-way that can paralyze the enemy for up to five minutes. Can only be used one per thread. Drawback to using this attack is it puts a lot of stress on the heart and can weaken the body's defense. "Victory Fanfare" - - Moriko usually rolls her shoulders and lets out a sigh of relief, glad that the battle is over. "Game Over" - The cute blonde falls to her knees and whispers "I'm sorry..."
Weapon and Items: Weapon - Brass knuckles - fit over her hands and can withstand the ability of "Thunder" (Made of steel regardless of the name) Item - Lightning-Cloud-in-a-Cup - Lightning in a small jar to provide an energy boost when needed to "recharge"
Appearance: Moriko is five feet and six inches tall with wavy dark, blonde hair that rests against her breasts and electric blue eyes that have been known to chance shades in the winter and summer months. She has a gentle curved figure and rather skinny, but NOT unhealthy. She usually wears a simi light grey T-shirt with some sort of quote on them that almost no one understood--expect her brother...possibly. She also wears dark, tattered skinny jeans. Not to mention her infinite and rather obsessive collection of "Chuck All-Star" shoes. Her favorite pair being faded, muddy Irish green high tops.
Personality: Moriko is a timid young girl; known for her natural kindness towards her classmates, family and just people in general. She can be easily flustered by compliments and tends to be awkward when she’s given one and will usually manage a simple “thank you” and stare at her feet with a reddening face. When she becomes nervous, she goes into “Defense mode” which consists of raising her hands to her chest and fiddling with a necklace and pointing her toes inward—as if that’ll fend off any threat. Though she tries her best to be friendly with everyone, her voice doesn't seem to reach any higher than a soft murmur. At her high school, she has very little friends--considering she’s never really adjusted from leaving Radiant Garden. Despite all this, her brother taught her a bit of martial arts just in case any Heartless--or boys--tried to harm her. Her brother found her to be a good fighter and well disciplined. He was also surprised to discover her amazing abilities with "Thunder" magic--and also her lack in any other Magic Abilities. Her preferred weapon is brass knuckles and Magic "Thunder".
Original World: Radiant Garden
Current World: Twilight Town
History: Moriko was born on a lovely spring day to a small family in the beautiful city, Radiant Garden. Her elder brother, like many brothers, was not thrilled to have another edition to the small, kind family. But as the years past, he realized how much he truly loved his little sister and decided to protect her with his life. So he taught her all he knew about martial arts and magic. They spent endless hours practicing and reading up on magical spells—even if they were not skilled enough to perform them. She lived a happy childhood, playing with her brother along with her very few friends and studying the world around her. Her blue eyes always seemed to pull her mind into a distant day dream as she’d stare up at the stars at the peaceful night sky. Her brother would always tell her about how each star was actually a distant world. Her eyes would always light up and a large grin would spread across her face when he told her this and she’d ask more questions about each world and if one day they could go visit them. He would always laugh and nod his head, promising to one day take her on a trip to visit those worlds. But you should always be careful for what you wish for. The cute girl had always wished to visit other words, but she never intended to live in a completely new and different one. When she turned fourteen-years-old, her family became greatly concerned with the sudden appearance of "Heartless" that rampaged all over various worlds—including their home, Radiant Garden. Out of fear, her mother, father and elder brother took a train to Twilight Town in hopes to escape the Heartless population that later reduced the entire city to a simple castle and poor village. Radiant Garden had now become Hollow Bastion. Despite this tragedy, Mori began a new life as she day-dreamed of once again visiting the place in which she came from. She found it hard to adjust to a new life style and in such a tiny city. Though she loved the more earthy appeal Twilight Town woods had to offer and the haunted old mansion, she missed her peaceful Fountain Court and various shops. She liked having the option to escape from her home, family and school life and go exploring. Sadly though, not anymore.
Role-Playing Sample: Radiant Garden. A beautiful city with lush flowers, shining streets, and peculiar people. The cute blonde, Moriko, took in the sight of her once lovely home when she saw some old classmates of hers heading for the market to shop. The shy girl extended a hand towards them, about to call out their names in her quiet voice when the sky turned a dark, hazy color. Suddenly, the city seemed to be frozen in an unending darkness. The nervous girl looked around hastily before the ground below her turned black and began to pull her into an endless pit. She let out a faint cry for help, twisting and squirming. "No! Please!" she cried into the nothingness. It became dark. Darker than anything Moriko had ever seen in her life. She couldn’t even tell if her eyes were open. She felt as if she was weightless and asleep—just…floating in the seemingly endless darkness. Moriko stirred before bolting upright. She had a lingering sense of fear--the dream she had had already forgotten. She shakily ran her fingers through her dark blonde curls before they fell over her shoulder as she attempted to throw her unwanted feelings from her mind. Again, she had had an eerie feeling that something was watching her while she slept. But when she turned her eyes towards her bedroom window, she saw nothing but the moon staring back at her. It was a gentle shade of silver with a few small craters on its surface. The stars around her twinkled gently and added a friendly glow to her electric blue eyes that gazed back. "Maybe I've seen too many horror films," she concluded, settling back into bed and resting her head once again against her soft pillow and closing her eyes, trying to focus on her breathing and the distant sounds of the train station as visitors arrived to Twilight Town. Soon it all became white noise as she drifted back to sleep. Yet she still couldn't waver the feeling that something really WAS out her bed room window...and it was relentlessly whispering her name.
Questions/Comments/Suggestions? I do not own the picture. Belongs to its rightful owner. Just using it to reference what Moriko's hair and face might look like. ALSO! I'm dyslexic and naturally have trouble spelling and using correct words. I'd appreciate if people who kindly point out any grammar errors so I may fix them. Thank you!
Feb 23, 2012 22:33:52 GMT -4
Last Edit: Mar 3, 2012 18:30:03 GMT -4 by foreverfugitive
Ohaithair again~ :3 I'll be assisting you with your profile, and giving you some first-time pointers.
First thing is that we have a minimum worl limit on personallity, appearence, history and the RP Sample, and you are lacking in these terms. Please, add to them and feel free to be as descriptive as you want. ^^ Generally, the more you tell us, the better you can develop the character as a whole. (( Limits on each of these can be found here
Some examples of this include ((but are not limited to)):
Having her be trained how to fight with her chosen weapon
Schools she went to/friends she made
More descriptive wording on the attack of the Heartless on Radiant Garden. There was a lot more to it then just a simple attack, so perhaps you could view the KH Wiki's history of Radiant Garden and use some of that to add to your profile.
What she did upon arriving in Twilight Town
Do your best, then reply once you finish, and we'll continue on this profile-making progress. ^^
Feb 25, 2012 12:44:26 GMT -4
Last Edit: Feb 25, 2012 12:48:15 GMT -4 by Deleted
Hmm...let's start with the powers. I see that she can use Thunder magic, but one thing lacks. In order to use magic, she would need a recharge on the spells. I suggest a 1 post-recharge post for her first Thunder attack and 2 posts for the second one.
It is better, but time on WD can be...well, iffy, to say the least. The problem I see is that this "1 to 2 minutes" that is specified can last anywhere from a single post to a chain of posts. How we solve this is by saying "requires X amount of posts to recharge" or "usable once per thread", or anything similar to that.
Also, is there a possible drawback to her using her skills? I'm not going to require this, but drawbacks would be good for her future growth as a character. It may be something to consider.
Appearance: I don't think that Skyrim would exist in WD history, as well as the "cake is a lie" meme. That would suggest an affiliation to the real world, so I am going to ask you to change that.
Post by Ellie who has 0% on Mar 17, 2012 19:16:46 GMT -4
Here's some stuffy to fix up:
+ Powers - Make it clear here that she can conduct thunder spells not her . From reading it, at first it sounded like her knuckles were augumented.
- Thunder fists: Make it 2 posts cool down duration. //Also make it 'their fists' doesn't make any sense.\\
- Lightening Zen: We do not judge abilities with real time, because time is easily manipulated by rpers, so we go by post counts.
-Omit Lightening...in a jar thingy.
-History: This is the main issue, because it's horribly off timeline wise.
Radiant Garden downfall was 9 yrs before Kingdom Hearts, so she DEFINATELY wouldn't be 16 when that happened and 16 now. In fact she would be roughly27.
