Rain WIP

[Zephiris]

Just recall the nature of Heartless. For one to be humanoid, it's Somebody must have had a lot of Darkness in their Heart, and their anger and other bad traits will flourish in their Heartless counterpart. It seems Rain isn't entirely humanoid, but she is sentient. Retaining a shred of humanity is fine, but I'd still like to see her falling to her darker side now and again. Basically, I believe you need to adjust her personality to fit her species a bit better. You can keep some core stuff, just amp up the darkness.

Heartless are fueled by the Hearts they devour, mind. That's how they get power. A lot of your abilities may not be possible if she has never attacked another person before, unless she is running entirely on the darkness in her Somebody's Heart.

In the Appearance section, just keep in mind that she is made of shadow, so if you want you can add that she can flux in appearance a tad bit when she desires. (Heartless in the game bulge and warp a bit, as you may notice, and creatures like Shadows can merge into the ground.) A currently played Dark XII member can lunge like a blob of liquid shadow through the air.

No problem regarding the picture delay.

3 days for any edits you'd like to make. Feel free to ask for clarification.

[Zephiris]

By the way. If you would like to hop back in for a little bit and send me a PM, I think you very much misunderstood a few things, and I can help you with them for the future.

In other words, I made quite a large reply to your other PMs before you deleted your account. :/ They may be words you would like to hear, may not, but they are there if you'd like them.