Aros Ukir: The Dark Soul

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Name-Aros Ukir

Nickname-The Dark Soul, The Lost Soul, Soul Eater, The Dark One, Hell's Angel

Age-Unknown, appears to be 14-18, claims to millenia

Gender-Male

Species- Dark Soul, a being no a heart that was consumed by darkness, much like Sora's anti form, a dark Soul has a shadow going 360* around them,  and also eats Soul's and Hearts, however look like humans with pure white eyes, no pupils

Alignment-Allies with whoever is strongest and will give him hearts and/or souls

Gang/Organization-The Lost Souls of Kingdom Hearts

Powers/Abilities/Techniques/Skills

Darkening-Aros will occasionally be thrown into a rage and allow himself to become a heartless machine, making them and becoming one himself, he is given an extreme boost of strength here but all other skills/abilities are canceled and items are unusable unless his comrade is giving it to him.

Soul Devour-Aros can only use this after he has hit an enemy three times while the enemy is inside his shadow, he grabs them yanks open their mouth and sucks their soul into himself and devours it, this will instantly defeat his enemy, making them a Dark Soul, but also disables all of his abilities until he is able to get his shadow back to full strength, 5 foot radius, 360* around, as it disappears when he uses the ability

Death Strike- Aros will be able to swing his sword, Death Eater, with much more strength, speed, and capability after he has taken an enemy's soul, and his shadow hasn't grown full size yet.

Shadow Possession- Aros can, when enraged, make his shadow an exact match to his enemy, but as an anti form, if this Dark Shadow is to impale his enemy two times the shadow disappears and the enemy loses his/her heart and Aros eats it, the drawback to this is Aros no longer has his 360 shadow so all attacks are invalid unless the shadow is the one dealing them, also Aros is likely to pass out/fall into a coma after use for prolonged time, the shadow will not disappear until achieving two times impaling an enemy, or it is slashed through and the enemy reaches Aros.

Weapons/Items- Death Eater- Aros's dark sword, a weapon made of the first soul's he ever obtained, it has a mouth on it for it to devour more souls of anyone that is struck with it during the Death Strike ability. It is long, a dark black color, and has spikes across the hand guard. 

Rune Stone- A healing stone that Aros wears around his neck at all times, should he fall a companion or his Puppet Shadow will heal him using this. It is a simple stone with a pink gem set into it.

Appearance- Aros is a tall, thin man who's age appears to be anywhere from fourteen to eighteen and he has one scar across his cheek where a keyblade wielder cut him and he ran off in fear. He has pure black hair and wears a jacket soaked with blood. He will also often wear paints that are red naturally, or will wear shorts that a dark black. He will tend to use the shadows to change his height or bulk on his body, but normally he is about 6'3" and often tends to show everyone his only tattoo, a dark red dragon that has his sword impaled inside it.

Personality- Aros, unlike most Dark Souls, has feelings and temperament, he is quick to anger and when angered will often fly off the handle on someone, cursing and slashing at them with his sword or claws. The only thing he fears is the power of the keyblade, when he was first out of Kingdom Hearts and was getting Souls in Twilight Town he was attacked by a boy who had one, who said he went by the name of Oscuridad Luz, japanese for "Dark and Light". He has one hobby and it is his strongest talent, taking and eating souls.


Original World- End of the World/Kingdom Hearts
Current World- Travels but is usually in Twilight Town or The World That Never Was

History-Aros Ukir was born and raised within the dark depths of Kingdom Hearts and wasn't let out until Ansem-The Seeker of Darkness opened the door although  he did not know this until later, after the door opened he realized it was his chance to escape as he could not open a Corridor of Darkness without being outside of Kingdom Hearts, he looked over not knowing what happened, then a year later while Sora was stopping organization XIII Aros learned about him from one of his minions
and fruitlessly searched for him, then he finally decided to stop and collect more souls, but a young boy with a keyblade harmed him, making him learn to fear the keyblade even if he didn't know the young man. Then a little more than 3 months later while Sora was back on the islands Aros found the young man and took his soul, not knowing that the true keymaster still waited, blissfully unaware of the Dark Souls while Aros gathered power to defeat Sora. Then when this new story began and he heard a rumor of Sora and Kairi's nobodies returning he got angry and he now searches for the ones who could give him the power to defeat Sora and company. Little did anyone know but he didn't know anything until Sora defeated Ansem and he hated Sora for this, which is why he wished to kill him, he should have gotten his abilities himself, not from a washed up heartless that Sora defeated.


Rp Sample- It was another dark day in Twilight Town when Aros came, praying Roxas or Namine were there only to find another creature he knew too well, a nobody "Please! Leave me be fools! I've no use of you!" he yells summoning Death Eater and destroying every nobody only to be over run with many many more nobodies "Leave me!" he yells as they all tackle him, making him fly off the handle once more and swing his sword at random until he once again sees a familiar shape, a keyblade. He looks and sees the holder is a boy with hair as blue as the skies, he scaredly backs up only to hear the boy say "Sora may no nothing of your plans! But I do! Dark Soul, you die now!" he says then casts fire and hits Aros in the chest, knocking him into a wall "No..." Aros says, then he yells "DARKENING!" Then he becomes a giant Heartless and makes several soldiers, then they all attack the boy while he slashes with his claws, ripping the jacketoff of the boys body to reveal a shirt decorated with the blood several victims "Hmph...you're no keyblade wielder!" Aros says as he turns normal and stabs the boy several times and says "Soul Devour" and eats the young boys soul. "Mmmmm...delicious" he says smiling as he disappears.    '

Comments- All I wanna say is thanks for reading this you guys because I know your eyes must really hurt from all the subscriptions people put!

[Era]

Hello Aros Ukir, I'm Era and I'll be reviewing your profile.

I will admit that this character is rather out-of-the-box, but in accordance with the rules on World Destiny, the entire profile is looking like it will need to be reworked before I can accept it for Roleplay here on World Destiny.

I have listed the things that will need to be addressed if you should want to go about addressing them, but I'll leave the choice up to you:


Species:
-Firstly, his species suggests he's a Heartless; as they are beings whose hearts have been consumed by Darkness.

According to the Kingdom Hearts canon, when a person's heart is consumed by Darkness, a Heartless is created, and so is a Nobody; who is the empty shell left behind.

Because of this, we cannot allow characters to jump in and out of Heartless form at will. With the exception of very, very rare cases, once one becomes a Heartless, they never go back. (And presently we haven't allowed sentient Heartless outside of the Dark Twelve. However, if you do want one of those spots, feel free to apply! ^_^)


Powers:
Heartless Creation:
-Secondarily, Heartless cannot be manufactured easily - each one is born either from the Darkness in an individual's heart (pureblood Heartless), or from Ansem's canonical creations (emblem Heartless). I apologize if this ruins some of your character concept, but these are the rules which I must abide by as a Profile Checker.

Soul Devour:
-This one is a bit tough for me to be okay with. The ability to yank out a person's soul doesn't sit right with me. I understand his alignment isn't intended to be good, but there is far too much ability for this to go wrong with other peoples' characters for me to be able to allow Soul Devour in good conscience. This kind of defeats the purpose of Soul Devour too. =/

Shadow Posession:
-This one's in the same boat ; it is too powerful to be allowed on the forums.

Weapons:
Death Eater: Even if he's had the sword and no World Destiny characters' souls are directly associated, it still implies that he's been able to steal souls before, and its very existence being based on soul-eating warrants that I say no to this, too.

Rune Stone: This is good, a neat idea and I have no qualms with it. =]

Personality:
Oscuridad Luz I'll chalk it up to a slip of thought, but that isn't Japanese.

General conceptualization:
-Equally, I think that according to the above guidelines as set forth by the World Destiny hierarchy which I must stand by, I think that might totally nullify Aros Ukir's reason for existing.

History:
-As it stands, I don't think there's reason behind Aros Ukir being freed from the Heartless side of the Door to the Light… He seems Heartless sometimes, Humanoid other times… I'm trying to justify him being born within the Darknesss, as even the Heartless started out as Somebodies once.

-Additionally we can't allow interaction with canons unless there is a dire need for it, and the RPers holding the Canons in question have given their permission to associate with the characters… (otherwise characters usually meet through RP threads.)

RP Sample:
To clarify, we use third person past tense all the time. I saw a little of both going on there. ^^ So, if you need clarification just let me know here or through PM.

Structure:
While I saw the things we are looking for in the profile, it is not in our typical skeleton, and thus the font makes it seem a bit obnoxious, paragraph breaks are oddly dispersed, and it's harder to tell where one concept starts and another begins.

For your convenience I have attached a link to the thread containing our profile skeleton >>here<<.

Please utilize the skeleton provided or add the bold marks manually, with tags:
[b]The text to be emboldened here.[/b]

Closing thoughts;
-I apologize this is all a bit long-winded and it will require a complete reworking of Aros Ukir, and I understand that it may be a bit frustrating, but bear with us! ^_^ I hope to see you around soon and let me know if you have further comments / suggestions or need clarification.

Kind regards,
-Era