Xionas [R]

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ORIGINAL or CANON: Original


Series of Origin: kingdom Hearts X Neocoded(fan fiction by xionas on fanfiction.net) 





Name: Xionas    


Nickname: General Xionas, Xionas the 9th defender


Age: 18


Gender: male


Species: Human


Being Type: Half-Heartless Half Nobody


Position: Good
Member of the Kings Force(see history)

Appearance: Standing at 5'10" Xionas Has a Semi Bulky figure but that's covered by his Black ORG. XIII cloak, his shimmering Blonde Hair resembles that of his Fathers(see history) and he has the attitude of a Warrior, often alone he has the look in his eyes that resembles Sorrow and is often sen with a look of steel at his enemies. and his skin tone if not covered by his cloak is a light tan 


History: Xionas Comes from an Alternate Universe Where war is raging between the Neo XIII(resurrected Org. XIII members) and the United Kings force( all the Disney worlds in KH and KH 2), Xionas was and is Part of the Kings force, during the Great War he lost his wife and Son in a crash from nobody attack and Vexen was to blame, he though h could go back in time to fix his future and with the help from Donald he built it but Chip accidentally split coffee on the mainframe and he woke up at the Station of arrival in Twilight town but not the twilight town He  knew  
He was Taught by only the best; King Mickey, Pocahontas, Tron and Sora, each of his masters Taught him something new like Tron taught him Tactical Combat and Pocahontas taught him all the Magic he needed to learn. his family includes Roxas(Father), Xion(Mother), Luxlord(Father-in-Law),D'Cloux(wife [also a Character i created{see my fan fiction}]), and Lenox(son) 


Current Primary Objective: Find out If he can get back to HIS world 


Learning type: Kinsthetic and Visual


Personality: Almost to himself he prefers to focus on the task at hand though when he makes friends he keeps them until death and will die for them, he fears very little and only fears his heartless form. 


Home World: Twilight Town(alternate Universe)


Natural Affinities/Abilities/Skills:
Fire- only the first tier due to this universes affect on his skill, all though his flames will linger for a good three turns
Blizzard- again first tier due to this Universe
Cure edge- smacks his opponent with his weapon and heals them( more damaged than healed) 
Bio- an AOE poisoning move 
Zantensuken 
Limitations/Drawbacks: Heartless form( turns into The Maestro a large heartless symbolizing the  Trick master with a Top hat) 


Passive:
Heartborn Nightshade


Weapon: Primal Darkness, and Neo light 


swords made from the embers of nobodies and heartless

Role Playing Sample:
as Xionas wandered the street of this alternate twilight town he thought about his world and his family.  "D'cloux" he thought  to himself "I need to do this for her", as he dashed to streets of Twilight town he wondered " can i still use it?" he lifted his hand and shouted "Portalis" nothing.  then some heartless appeared "these are measly shadows I can defeat them.  he draws out his weapons "Zantensuken" and they crumble into nothingness.  


Questions/Comments/Suggestions?

to ERA i know the Original Rules stated no keyblades unless given but my character has two keyblades(primal Darkness and Neo light) due to his Parents is that OK  

[Jin]

Hey there,

There are quite a few issues with this profile, and before I tell you what brought this decision on I'd like to make it clear that this isn't the kind of character you're going to be able to use on the forum. There are major revisions that need to be made before you can be approved. These revisions will likely fundamentally change who your character is enough that I recommend making a new profile, honestly.

While we do allow original characters on here, we don't allow them to have characters from canon in their backstory - even if they're from a different dimension and especially not if they're the offspring of two canon characters. The view here is that you've made your character special by making them related to established characters, and not because of their own merit.

Furthermore, your character will not be allowed to wield any number of keyblades regardless of their parentage. You need to participate in and complete the proper events to unlock that potential. Again, this is just a way to make your character seem special.

There are also a lot of spelling/grammar related concerns to be found here. Further, your backstory is incredibly short to the point of being underdeveloped.

I'm also worried that your only listed drawback seems more like another power than an actual drawback.

You're welcome to apply for a new character. Or, if you want to make some major revisions to this one, you're also free to reapply for Xionas once the issues have been worked out.

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Jin I Apologize for my rudeness on not mentioning his Heartless form
Once in it he cant control it

[Jin]

That's all well and good, but I'm afraid you're still not going to be able to use Xionas on the site.