Ale (Axel`s heartless)

[tarxivs]

-Name: Ale
-Nickname: Fire demon

-Age: Unknown

-Gender: Male

-Species: Heartless

-Position: Evil, Dark XII #8

-Powers: He has the power to control black flames called Hellfire, all his attacks are based on it, he can also ignite his Chakram, even from afar. His attacks are:
---> Hell Blast: Hellfire is concentrated in front of the palm, when the hand closes it results in a great explosion
---> Doom Circle: The Chakram begins to spin parallel to the ground, a red circle forms around it (diameter of about 10 meters) then the inside of the circle ignites, burning everything inside and also serving as a defense
---> Cerberus`s Triangle: The Chakram starts to spin engulfed in Hellfire, two fire rings appear next to it, the three are launched forming a triangle around the opponent, from each one appears a dog-like head made of the black flames facing at the enemy, at the same time they let out a burst of fire directly at the target
---> Rising Firefalls: Engulfed in dark fire Ale elevates, a fire tower appears around him, and then other fire towers begin to erupt from the ground, attacking the enemy

-Weapon: A big Ckakram (only one), black and red, at touch they are hot enough to burn you, making Ale the only one who can use them

-Appearance: He looks just like his nobody, He has spiky red hair, tear marks behind his eyes, he wears a black coat similar to the one from the organization, but fire themed (at the end of the coat, the hood, the sleeves, etc.), behind the coat he wears red pants, with black (also fire-themed) shoes

-Personality: He has a policy: "The only one who needs to be cared for is oneself, everybody else is just trash", he has bad temperament, he shows respect only for his superiors, though he drops the act when they`re not present, he acts coldly, he helps only himself, and mocks everyone around him, he loves to fight, but only if the fight can give him power, he hates nobodies as they don`t have hearts so they`re useless to him. His catch-phrase is: "Commit it to memory". Because he thinks worrying is a drag he tends to let luck decide, he makes decisions throwing a coin. His hobby is strolling down the street thinking about past battles, and the battles that are to come. One of his goals is to eliminate The Organization, that way those nobodies won`t mess in his plans

-Original World: Unknown
-Current Residing World: The World That Never Was

-History/Background: Ale was a bounty hunter back in the old days, he traveled a lot, one of his most visited places being Traverse town, many people there wanted revenge on someone, a revenge that he could fulfill for money, and the opportunity to become stronger, though he battled against a lot of heartless, he became one himself, his lust for power drove him through the dark path, losing his heart to darkness...He hunts powerful hearts, not because of his nature as a heartless, but because he thinks that if he devours the most powerful hearts he would become invincible, that (and the opportunity to battle against the key wielders) made him join the Dark XII, and seek kingdom Hearts, the most powerful heart of all. He`s been thinking of ways to finish of Organization XIII before the door to Kingdom Hearts is open, another thing he has noticed is that "that Sora boy", the wielder of the Kingdom Key hasn`t been seen in many worlds, he`s planning something, and he hopes it means coming to the castle, that way his prey will come for himself, saving time for him...

-Role Playing Sample: The dark streets of "The City That Never Was" where almost in complete darkness, only illuminated by the heart-shaped moon, he had his hood on, walking aimlessly, nobodies appeared around him, Dusks they were, about 20 of them, though Ale payed them no attention, they obviously didn`t know who he was, they approached, a couple of them jumped to attack him, but they were burned to nothingness by dark flames, Ale had his Chakram in hand, he calmly lowered his hood, the weapon started to spin in his hand, engulfed in the same black fire...

"You obviously don`t know who I am weaklings, the name`s Ale...Comit it to memory...it`s the last name you`ll hear"

he launched himself against them, with three swings it was all over, nothing was left, only black flames covered the ground

"I have no interest in you, those who don`t possess a heart are useless to me"

He put his hood back on and he continued his stroll

[shiay]

Okay... first things first:

Powers
Appearance
Personality
History/Background

The things listed above need to be lengthened, please.

Three days to edit.

[tarxivs]

ready I edited it

[shiay]

Okay, it looks good, however, Personality and History/Background still need to be lengthened, and I'd like to ask for proper spacing, please ^^

[tarxivs]

modified, if there`s another problem could you tell me in detail please? xD cause i`ve read and reread the rules to make a character and I think it`s ready (but obviously I`m new so I can be wrong)

[shiay]

Haha, well this looks a lot better. ^^

Well, I really do like your concept of Ale, considering that most of the Dark XII are mainly characters that the members have improvised a profile for.

Anyhow, accepted. Please post in Final Profiles and update your signature with your character ^^

[tarxivs]

thank you I will do so