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Don't forget to attack the enemies back, after they get their hit in! ))
Nyra, panting, finally caught up with Renzo. She raised Nocturne and struck at the black devils, beating them back in an attempt to give Renzo a chance to fight back. The two of them could do this. Right?
She stole a sideways glance at her companion, and her eyes widened. Three gashes dripped scarlet from his chest. Her brow furrowed sharply, and she swung out at a Neoshadow leaping for Renzo's back. Before she could hit it, however, she let out a pained gasp - a talon had just skid across her back from shoulder to thigh. Using quick gusts of aero magic, Nyra leapt a few paces away from the frenzy and tenderly touched her back. The slice was shallow, luckily.
Assured that she wasn't going to pass out any time soon, Nyra rushed back into the fray. She swung Nocturne yet again at a Neoshadow creeping upon Renzo.
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The Neoshadow initially lunging towards Renzo had been forced to flit back when a lance swung straight at him. Its companions took over from there, one of them leaping out from behind and one from the side.
Once the dark-haired girl got near the fight one of the three Heartless broke off and crept up behind her. While she swung for its companion on the Ronzo's back, the Neoshadow leapt up slashed at her. She moved away just in the nick of time, leaving a much shallower cut than there would have otherwise been on her back.
Two of the Neoshadows lunged towards the girl, one towards the Ronzo. One went sprawling into the Agrabah sand after being slashed by the girl's blade. It disappeared in a rush of darkness.
Renzo saw one of black beings rush towards him again. Useing one hand to block the monstrosity while his other thrust forward. Little blue sparks darted from his hand and flickered towards the black shadowy being until it pierced through the creature's chest. The blue sparks then flickered back towards Renzo and pierced his chest but it didn't hurt him instead the area where the monster hit him seemed to feel better and he felt more of his energy return.
Renzo smiled as he felt the pain go away and he raised his lance ready to do battle again. He charged at the black creature lance at the ready. A mighty roar bellowed from him as he jabbed with great ferocity at the shadowy creature. As his lance passed clean through the shadowy creature he felt the tip of it's claws scratch him again lightly. He looked down to see how badly he was hurt and saw that he was barly hurt and it seemed like the creature barly even hit him. He quickly looked up noth knowing that he killed the creature , he raised his lance quickly again still not knowing he killed the black creature. He quickly scanned the area to see where it could have ran off to but he couldn't see it anywhere, he decided he must have killed it.
Now that the creature attacking Renzo was gone, he quickly turned his attention to the the black thing attacking Nyra. He got his lance ready to help Nyra fight the last black monster.
(( Now, a key point about battling is: let the other party have a chance to respond to -everything-. If you swing, make sure you wait until they say whether it hit or misses. Same deal with magic, ect. Even something as harmless as reaching out your hand. Give them a chance to swipe it away. You can never be to sure!
If the other party is dodging absolutely everything, however, then you can speak up. ;] A good battle is where each side takes a little and gives some back.
You've done well so far. In this situation, though, it'd probably be best to say that "Little blue sparks darted from his hand and flickered towards the black shadowy being, intending to pierce through the creature's chest." This way you don't accidentally god-mod.
Note: try spell-checking before posting. 'Barly' is spelled 'barely', ect. ))
Nyra was engaged in her own little battle with the remaining Neoshadow. She whipped back and forth, using bursts of speed and slashing where she could, but the shadowy creature matched her move for move. At last, in frustration, she rushed forward with a yell and thrust Nocturne forward with a burst of aero.
She took a heartbeat to catch her breath, and glanced over at Renzo. With wide eyes she realized that he had already finished off his Heartless, and was heading over to assist with hers.
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The Neoshadow battling Renzo twitched when the blue light pierced its chest. Its movements suddenly became dramatically slower. With the last remaining energy it rose its feet and leaped at the Ronzo, talons extended.
A lance passed through its body and it vanished in a swirl of shadow.
Meanwhile, the remaining Heartless duplicated Nyra's movements nearly perfectly. It's mind was sharper than its Shadow and Soldier cousins. When the short gust of wind pummeled it, however, the creature was knocked off its feet.
Rather than scramble back up, the Neoshadow melted into the ground and became one with the shadows. It waited until the woman and Ronzo were together, unsuspecting, before leaping from behind and lashing out with its talons.
((Sorry about spell check thingy I posted that at around 2 in the morning and I wasn't thinking straight, also yeah I was a little confused on who controlled the heartless me, you, or both because they were like not a true players character))
Renzo reached Nyra quickly. He stopped and he took a deep breath to regain some of his energy. "Where is it?" he asked calmly scanning with a scowl on his face back and forth for the last creature not sure where it went. "Is it dead?" he asked her still scanning the area for it. Now that the creature wasn't here though Renzo just noticed the sun was still shining brightly down on him. He felt a drop of sweat fall off him and then he noticed that he was actually quite tired from his battle with the black monster.
Renzo still couldn't spot the creature and was confused. He still didn't lower his lance for he still didn't know if it was dead or just hiding. Another drop of sweat dropped from Renzo's head.
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(( Okay, no problem! Yeah, that's why I started putting a dash between me controlling Nyra and me controlling the Heartless.
Also, remember that the Heartless already leapt out at everyone. ;] Attack it back! ))
"Where is it?"
Nyra shook her head in confusion.
"Is it dead?"
"No." That, at least, she was certain.
She stood as close as she could to Renzo, hardly daring to move. It was around here somewhere. But right as she looked down - realizing that if anywhere, the shadows would be the place to look - a sharp force slashed her from behind.
She shouted out, spinning around with Nocturne. The strike, she hoped, would be enough to vanquish the creature.
"Renzo!" She yelled. "Get it with your lance!"
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The heartless had already slashed out at the women's back and had leaped onto the Ronzo's when it felt a cold blade slashing through it. It leaped away just in the nick of time. The Neoshadow went sprawling into the dust, weakened, but not fatally slow.
However, Neoshadows were intelligent. It heard the woman yell to the man, and could comprehend. As quick as it was able, the creature aimed to attack her again, rather than risk nearing the Ronzo's lance.
((Were you referring to this post or last?)) When Renzo saw the creature try to attack Nyra it got him mad, no more than mad; enraged. Renzo was loyal to his friends and family and would defend them to his death but, now that one of them was about to be attacked in front of him, he wouldn't take it; he wouldn't let more friends die or get hurt. "No," he roared and he raised his lance again to strike the beast.
With great speed and strength that Renzo didn't even know he had he jabbed at the remaining creature. He didn't know if he would hit the creature or how hard he had swung but he stayed true with his strike to hit the black beast.
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Unsuspecting the ferocity of the Ronzo, the final Neoshadow had misjudged its distance from its lance. As it leaped for the woman's back it became speared by the razor-point weapon.
Like its companions, the Heartless disappeared in a flurry of darkness.
- -
Nyra straightened up, panting. Her eyes quickly flitted across the area for more enemies; she relaxed a bit upon finding none, but didn't sheathe Nocturne just in case.
Her eyes watched the Heartless fade back into darkness, and then switched to Renzo. "Are you alright?" she asked.
As for her - her arms were sore, her wounds smarted painfully, and she was desperately out of breath, but overall she was fine. A sense of pride suddenly flitted into her mind. She had done well in that battle, and Renzo even more so.
She had never seen that type of Heartless before. In the back of her mind she felt a twinge of unease. If this was what attacked them in the streets of Agrabah in broad daylight, then what would they possibly find in the mysterious depths of the Cave of Wonders?
"Let's move on," she decided resolutely. They would continue and take whatever the darkness threw at them.
(( Let's say one more post from you for this scenario, and then we can move on to something else. ))
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Last Edit: Mar 28, 2011 19:23:02 GMT -4 by Zephiris
((okay)) Renzo panted not knowing how much that strike took out of him. "Yes," he said a bit more calmly. He continued to take calm but quick breaths. He raised an arm and a light mist of snow, ice, and cold wind blew in circles around Nyra and him. Slowly he felt the coldness seep into him in such a hot climate and he felt better with each passing moment he felt himself become less tired and he felt any remaining cuts on him heal.
Renzo nodded at Nyra. "We should continue," he told her. He gestured in a direction he hoped would lead to the mysteries Cave of Wonders. He scanned around in case other black things wanted to show there face.
Renzo slowly put away his lance at the sight of no enemies. He let out a deep sigh of relief.
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Last Edit: Mar 28, 2011 20:16:09 GMT -4 by Deleted
You know what? You're good to go. You've improved greatly from when you first entered the Academy.
Here is Renzo's original profile. Go ahead and repost that in the "Final Profiles" board and put the link in your signature, editing it for grammar a bit if you'd like to. And then I give you permission to post in the boards!
Keep on practicing, and feel free to refer back to this board if you wish. You learn very quickly. :]
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Last Edit: Mar 31, 2011 9:03:00 GMT -4 by Zephiris
Post by Jason Arilani on Apr 25, 2011 19:24:44 GMT -4
If you wish to admit yourself to the Roleplay Academy, that is fine. However, refrain from posting in someone else's lesson. If you wish to be taught, feel free to send me a message and I'll be happy to make a thread of your own.